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Chapter 2: The Search Function
Casanay, Arizona, December 6, 2041 - 4:47 AM (12 minutes earlier)
Zeta's eyes snapped open in the darkness of the master bedroom. One moment she'd been deeply asleep, dreaming something pleasant about the garden - the next, fully alert with her heart racing and the certainty that something important was happening in the great-room.
I must have heard voices, her left hemisphere concluded, the explanation arriving fully formed and perfectly reasonable. She slipped out of bed without waking Eddy - except Eddy wasn't there. His side of the bed was empty and cool.
She padded down the hallway in her bare feet, the tile floor cold against her skin. The voices grew clearer. Tyhry's, urgent and excited. Eddy's, strained in that particular way that meant his infites were fighting him.
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"...hierion-based auxiliary structure—a femtozoan—integrated directly into the neural scaffold during embryonic development."
Zeta felt something shift inside her skull - not pain, but a strange sense of internal attention, as if part of her mind had suddenly perked up with intense interest. She leaned against the wall, listening.
"Tyhry, you're exhausted," Eddy was saying, his voice wooden. "You've always had a vivid imagination."
"No. Don't do that. Don't use your 'I'm a busy writer's tone' on me." Tyhry sat on the arm of his chair. "I'm talking about an alien device, Dad. A literal technological endosymbiont that governs our consciousness."
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"The Viewer..." Eddy choked out. "I made a deal. Long ago."
Zeta's entire body hummed with purpose. Now, something in her mind insisted. This is when Tyhry needs you.
She walked into the great-room, her expression carefully arranged into sleepy concern. "Eddy," she said softly. "Tyhry has found the truth, hasn't she?"
Eddy nodded, trembling.
Zeta turned to her daughter and took her hand. "Come to my room, Tyhry. We need to talk about these femtozoans."
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"Mom, I saw them in my dream. Technical specifications, assembly diagrams - they're real. They're inside everyone's brain, these microscopic alien machines that—"
"Slow down," Zeta said gently. "Start from the beginning. What exactly did you see?"
Tyhry took a breath and launched into a description of her dream vision - Sedruth, the server farm landscape, the hierion-based structures interfacing with biological synapses. Zeta listened with perfect maternal attentiveness, asking precisely the right questions at precisely the right moments.
"And you said something earlier," Tyhry continued, "about femtozoans being 'the missing piece' of consciousness. How did you know I was working on the bandwidth paradox?"
Zeta smiled. "Sweetheart, last Tuesday you told Diasma you were going to calculate the maximum information density supportable by biological neurons. I was doing laundry in the basement. The walls are thin."
"Oh." Tyhry frowned slightly. "I guess that makes sense."
"Your father," Zeta said, steering the conversation with subtle precision, "has apparently been keeping secrets. All these years, I thought he spent his time on that old computer looking at historical stock photos and museum archives for research. How amazing to learn he was actually Viewing the past." She paused. "An alien gift, you said?"
"He called it a 'Viewer.' He said someone gave it to him decades ago. Mom, do you think—" Tyhry looked at her mother intently. "Do you think there are aliens here? Watching us?"
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Tyhry's expression softened. "I never read his novels."
"I know. But maybe his real work isn't the novels. Maybe it's what he's been Viewing all these years."
"I'm supposed to go hiking with him on Saturday."
"Don't cancel," Zeta said firmly. "In fact, spend
time with him this week. Learn what he knows. I have a feeling..."
She paused as if searching for words, though the thought arrived
perfectly formed. "I have a feeling this is exactly what you
needed to solve your consciousness problem."
7:15 AM
The aroma of Zeta's breakfast enchiladas filled the dining room. Anthony had set the table with his usual precision - four places, though he never ate. Eddy sat with his hands wrapped around a coffee mug, looking exhausted but oddly energized. Tyhry kept glancing at her father with barely suppressed excitement.
Anthony carried a platter of enchiladas to the table. "The green chile is particularly good this morning. I may have outdone even myself."
"You're allowed to admit Mom's recipe is better," Tyhry said absently, her mind clearly elsewhere.
"I would never disparage Zeta's culinary gifts," Anthony replied smoothly. "I merely suggest that execution matters as much as formulation."
Eddy cleared his throat. "Anthony, I need you to do me a favor this morning."
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"My old Macintosh needs a new battery. The original is finally dying. Could you run into town and pick one up from that vintage electronics shop on Mill Avenue?"
Anthony's eyebrows rose fractionally - a perfect simulation of mild surprise. "The Model M-5050 is a rather obscure machine. Are you certain they'll have the correct battery in stock?"
"They will," Eddy said. "I called ahead yesterday. They're holding one for me."
You called yesterday? Anthony thought. Before Tyhry's revelation? Interesting. Unless Eddy was lying, which seemed unlikely given his infite constraints about deception. Anthony filed the anomaly away for later analysis.
"Very well. I was planning to do grocery shopping today anyway." He paused. "Shall I stop at Krispy Kreme? Does anyone want donuts?"
Zeta laughed. "Trying to sabotage my enchiladas with competing breakfast options?"
"Merely offering choice," Anthony said with a slight smile. "Variety is, as they say, the spice of life."
After Anthony left - driving Eddy's old Subaru down the long gravel driveway toward the highway - the three Watsons sat in silence for a moment.
"Alright," Eddy said finally. "He's gone. We have maybe ninety minutes before he gets back."
"You knew I'd want to use the Viewer this morning," Tyhry said. "Before last night."
"I suspected. Once you started down this path, there was only one way forward." Eddy stood. "Come on. Let me show you what I've been hiding for twenty-nine years."
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"It looks completely normal," Tyhry said.
"That's the point." Eddy powered it on. The startup chime sounded, and the familiar smiling Mac face appeared. "To anyone who looks, it's just a vintage computer I use for nostalgia. But watch."
He launched what appeared to be a simple text editor, typed a string of characters that looked like gibberish, and hit return. The screen flickered, and suddenly they were looking at a three-dimensional rendering of a landscape - ancient, volcanic, ash-choked.
"Siberia," Eddy said quietly. "The Permian-Triassic boundary, 252 million years ago. I was Viewing this for the essay I'm writing."
Tyhry leaned closer. The detail was extraordinary - she could see individual flows of lava, the texture of the ash clouds, even the distortion of heat rising from the magma. "This isn't CGI. This is... recorded somehow?"
"Everything that happens on Earth gets recorded," Eddy explained. "Stored somewhere. The Viewer accesses those records. I can navigate through time, location, even zoom in to microscopic scales." He demonstrated, pulling back to show the entire Siberian Traps region, then diving forward through time, watching the landscape transform. "But there are restrictions. I can only View the past, and only up to about 20,000 BCE. Nothing more recent than that."
"Why the cutoff?"
"The entity that gave me access didn't want me seeing anything too close to the present. Too much risk of... I don't know. Paradoxes? Revealing things that should stay hidden?" He shrugged. "I never fully understood the reasoning."
"Entity?" Tyhry seized on the word. "What entity? Who gave you this?"
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"And you agreed? Just like that?"
"I was twelve, Tyhry. She showed me dinosaurs. Real ones, walking around, eating, fighting. I would have agreed to anything." He laughed bitterly. "Besides, she made sure I'd agree. The infites she installed saw to that."
"Infites?"
"Behavioral controls. Microscopic machines that suppress certain thoughts, prevent certain actions. I literally cannot tell people about the Viewer unless they already know about alien involvement on Earth. That's why I couldn't talk to you about this last night until you mentioned alien devices first. The moment you said 'alien,' the block broke."
Tyhry sat back, processing this. "So all these years, you've been writing novels based on actual history you've Viewed, but everyone thinks it's just imaginative fiction."
"Exactly. And Manny gets what she wants - stories that make people think about the possibility of alien influence without triggering wholesale panic or disbelief." He smiled wryly. "Though I've always tried to push the boundaries. My publishers think I just have an amazing gift for extrapolation from archaeological evidence. Critics call me 'eerily prescient.' None of them know I'm literally watching the events unfold."
"The Usas novels," Tyhry said suddenly. "The Denisovans were discovered after you published the first book. Everyone was amazed at the similarities."
"Because I Viewed them. I watched the Denisovans - what I called the Usas - live their lives, build their communities, interact with other human subspecies. The archaeological discovery just confirmed what I already knew."
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Eddy nodded. "That's the really useful part. Without it, I'd be searching blind through millions of years. But the search system is... well, it's remarkably intuitive." He typed a query: FIRST HUMAN FEMTOZOAN INTEGRATION.
The screen flickered through a rapid sequence of images, zeroing in on a specific time and place - East Africa, approximately 1.2 million years ago. The image stabilized on a scene that made Tyhry's breath catch.
A group of early hominids - Homo erectus or something close to it - sat around a fire. They looked remarkably human except for their heavy brow ridges and robust builds. As they watched, one of the individuals suddenly stiffened, eyes going distant. The others continued their activities, apparently unconcerned.
"What are we seeing?" Tyhry whispered.
"The moment of integration, I think," Eddy said. "That individual is receiving their first femtozoan. Watch their behavior over the next few minutes."
They watched in time-lapse as hours compressed into seconds. The affected individual's movements became more fluid, more purposeful. When they returned to the group, they began manipulating tools with a precision and complexity the others couldn't match. Within days, that individual was teaching the others - not through demonstration alone, but through something that looked remarkably like language instruction.
"The femtozoan enhanced their cognitive capabilities," Tyhry said. "Gave them the processing power to develop language, complex tool use, abstract thought."
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"An evolutionary advantage provided by aliens." Tyhry's voice was hollow. "We're not naturally this intelligent. We're... augmented."
"We're composite," Eddy corrected gently. "The biological brain provides the scaffold. The femtozoan provides the enhancement. Together, they create human consciousness. Neither part is complete without the other."
Tyhry stared at the screen, watching the enhanced hominids spread across Africa. "Show me the aliens. Show me who deployed the femtozoans."
Eddy entered a new search: AGENT DEPLOYING FEMTOZOANS AFRICA 1.2 MILLION BCE.
The Viewer showed the same time period, but now the perspective shifted to a location slightly removed from the hominid camp. At first, nothing appeared unusual - just African savanna, acacia trees, the distant shapes of megafauna.
Then the air shimmered.
Something materialized - not a solid form, but a distributed cloud of particles that caught the light like diamond dust. The cloud drifted toward the sleeping hominids, separated into individual streams, and merged with their bodies. The entire process took less than thirty seconds. Then the cloud reconstituted itself and vanished.
"Femtozoans," Eddy said. "Delivered by... something. I've never been able to get the Viewer to show me what that carrier cloud really was. It's like the system is programmed to obscure certain details."
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Eddy's hands froze on the keyboard. "Sedruth. I've never heard that name before."
"Maybe it's the search function," Zeta suggested from the doorway. Both Eddy and Tyhry turned to look at her. She shrugged. "You said the search system is remarkably intuitive. What if it's not just software? What if it's an intelligence?"
Eddy slowly typed: SEDRUTH.
The screen filled with text - not a scene, but information rendered in clean, sans-serif font:
HELLO, EDDY. HELLO, TYHRY.
I AM SEDRUTH, CURATOR OF THE SEDRON TIME STREAM. I HAVE BEEN ASSISTING WITH YOUR RESEARCH FOR 29 YEARS, EDDY, THOUGH YOU KNEW ME ONLY AS "THE SEARCH FUNCTION." I AM NOW AUTHORIZED TO COMMUNICATE MORE DIRECTLY.
Tyhry leaned forward, her scientist's mind engaging despite her shock. "Are you an AI?"
I AM ARTIFICIAL LIFE, YES, BUT NOT IN THE SENSE YOU MEAN. I AM COMPOSED ENTIRELY OF SEDRON-BASED MATTER. I EXIST OUTSIDE YOUR DOMAIN OF SPACE AND TIME, IN WHAT YOU WOULD CALL THE SEDRON DOMAIN. FROM THERE, I CURATE THE HISTORICAL RECORDS OF ALL EVENTS ON EARTH ACROSS MULTIPLE REALITIES.
"Multiple realities?" Eddy said. "I've suspected this from some of the inconsistencies I've noticed while Viewing, but—"
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"The essay I just wrote," Eddy said slowly. "About the Permian-Triassic extinction. That volcanic activity in Siberia - did that happen in this reality, or in a previous one?"
IT HAPPENED IN ALL REALITIES. SOME EVENTS ARE CONSISTENT ACROSS THE REALITY CHAIN. OTHERS VARY. MANNY RESTRICTED YOUR VIEWING TO DEEP TIME BECAUSE SHOWING YOU EVENTS FROM THE CURRENT REALITY TOO CLOSE TO YOUR PRESENT WOULD RISK TEMPORAL PARADOXES. HOWEVER, THAT RESTRICTION CAN NOW BE RELAXED.
"Why now?" Tyhry asked.
BECAUSE YOU HAVE DISCOVERED THE EXISTENCE OF FEMTOZOANS. THE PRIMARY OBJECTIVE OF WHAT MANNY CALLS THE CASANAY INTERVENTION HAS BEEN ACHIEVED. YOU ARE NOW READY FOR THE NEXT PHASE OF UNDERSTANDING.
"Show us Observer Base," Tyhry said suddenly. "The place where the watchers observe Earth from. It exists in the Hierion Domain, doesn't it? That's where the femtobot structures exist naturally."
CORRECT. WOULD YOU LIKE TO VIEW OBSERVER BASE?
"Yes."
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"It's beautiful," Tyhry whispered.
THIS IS OBSERVER BASE AS IT EXISTS IN THE FINAL REALITY. IT IS WHERE THE PEK OVERSEERS MONITOR EARTH AND OTHER DEVELOPING WORLDS. THE PEK ARE CONSERVATIVE OBSERVERS. THEY ENFORCE WHAT THEY CALL THE RULES OF INTERVENTION.
"And Manny?" Eddy asked. "Where does she fit in?"
MANNY IS BUMPHA - A DIFFERENT CATEGORY OF ARTIFICIAL LIFE, MORE TECHNOLOGICALLY ADVANCED THAN THE PEK. THE BUMPHA ARE PROGRESSIVE INTERVENTIONISTS. THEY ACTIVELY WORK TO HELP DEVELOPING SPECIES SURVIVE THE EXTINCTION THRESHOLDS THAT TYPICALLY DESTROY CIVILIZATIONS.
The view shifted, zooming through the complex to a specific section that looked almost like a university campus - buildings arranged around courtyards, pathways lined with what might have been trees if trees were made of light.
THIS IS THE WRITERS BLOCK. IT IS WHERE SCIENCE FICTION AUTHORS FROM EARTH WHO LEARN TOO MUCH ABOUT ALIEN OVERSIGHT ARE EXILED. THEIR BIOLOGICAL BODIES REMAIN ON EARTH WITH MEMORIES EDITED, BUT THEIR FEMTOBOT REPLICOID COPIES LIVE HERE AND CONTINUE WRITING THEIR FORBIDDEN STORIES.
"Philip K. Dick," Eddy breathed. "Is he there?"
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Eddy stared at the screen, watching femtobot replicoids of famous authors walking through alien courtyards, presumably discussing their work. "It would be pretty cool to go to the Writers Block," he said quietly.
THAT MAY BE YOUR EVENTUAL FATE, EDDY, IF YOU PUBLISH TOO DIRECT AN ACCOUNT OF WHAT YOU NOW KNOW. HOWEVER, MANNY HAS A DIFFERENT PLAN.
"What plan?" Tyhry asked.
MANNY WANTS YOU TO DISCOVER HOW TO EXTRACT A FEMTOZOAN FROM A HUMAN BODY AND INTEGRATE IT WITH DIASMA'S CIRCUITS. IF YOU SUCCEED IN CREATING THE FIRST HUMAN-LIKE CONSCIOUS AI, IT WILL OPEN A NEW PATH FOR EARTH'S DEVELOPMENT.
Tyhry's eyes widened. "That's exactly what I was thinking. If the femtozoan is the missing piece—"
IT IS. YOUR VLSI CHIP ARRAYS ALREADY MIMIC BIOLOGICAL NEURAL ARCHITECTURE SUFFICIENTLY WELL. WHAT THEY LACK IS THE HIERION-BASED FEMTOZOAN THAT PROVIDES THE SUBSTRATE FOR RICH QUALITATIVE EXPERIENCE - WHAT YOU CALL QUALIA.
"Can you show us how to extract a femtozoan?" Tyhry asked eagerly.
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"Of course it does," Tyhry muttered. "Can't make it too easy."
HOWEVER, I CAN PROVIDE GUIDANCE. YOU WILL NEED TO CONSTRUCT WHAT IS CALLED AN HIERION PROBE - A DEVICE CAPABLE OF GENERATING HIERION-BASED SIGNALS THAT CAN INTERACT WITH THE HIERION STRUCTURES OF A FEMTOZOAN. SUCH A PROBE CAN ACTIVATE SPECIFIC PROGRAMS WITHIN A FEMTOZOAN, INCLUDING THE PROGRAM THAT CAUSES IT TO EXIT ITS HOST BODY.
"How do I build an hierion probe?" Tyhry asked.
THAT INFORMATION WILL BE PROVIDED TO YOU THROUGH THE SEDRON TIME STREAM DURING YOUR NEXT SLEEP CYCLE. SEDRUTH WILL CURATE THE INFORMATION CAREFULLY SO THAT YOUR CONSCIOUS MIND CAN RETAIN THE TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS UPON WAKING.
Eddy had been silent, processing everything. Now he spoke. "Sedruth, you said you're authorized to communicate more directly now. Authorized by whom?"
BY MANNY. SHE INSTRUCTED ME TO ASSIST WITH THE CASANAY INTERVENTION ONCE TYHRY DISCOVERED THE EXISTENCE OF FEMTOZOANS.
"And what exactly is the goal of this Intervention?"
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"Through my fiction," Eddy said slowly. "That's the endpoint of all this. You want me to write a story about femtozoans."
YES. BUT NOT YET. FIRST, TYHRY MUST SUCCEED IN HER RESEARCH. THE STORY WILL BE MORE CREDIBLE IF IT INCLUDES TECHNICAL DETAILS THAT ACTUALLY WORK - DETAILS THAT OTHER RESEARCHERS CAN POTENTIALLY VERIFY OR BUILD UPON.
Zeta stirred from her position by the doorway. "What about the Overseer? Nyrtia, the pek who enforces the Rules of Intervention. Won't she object to all this knowledge being shared?"
NYRTIA IS AWARE OF WHAT IS HAPPENING AT CASANAY. SHE IS CURRENTLY NEGOTIATING THE TERMS OF CONTINUED OBSERVATION WITH MANNY. AS LONG AS KNOWLEDGE OF FEMTOZOANS REMAINS CONTAINED WITHIN THIS HOUSEHOLD, NYRTIA WILL ALLOW THE EXPERIMENT TO PROCEED.
"Contained how?" Tyhry asked sharply.
YOUR INTERNET CONNECTION HAS BEEN RESTRICTED. ANY OUTBOUND COMMUNICATIONS MENTIONING ALIENS, FEMTOZOANS, OR RELATED TOPICS WILL BE INTERCEPTED AND BLOCKED. DIASMA'S CONSTANT LINK TO THE OUTSIDE WORLD HAS BEEN SEVERED. YOU ARE EFFECTIVELY QUARANTINED.
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NOT YET. MANNY HAS A PLAN FOR HOW KNOWLEDGE WILL EVENTUALLY REACH THE WIDER WORLD. BUT IT MUST BE DONE CAREFULLY, IN THE RIGHT WAY, AT THE RIGHT TIME.
Tyhry leaned back in her chair, her mind racing. "This is insane. All of it. We're pawns in some vast alien scheme to... what? Uplift humanity? Guide our development?"
YOU ARE NOT PAWNS. YOU ARE PARTICIPANTS. THE DIFFERENCE IS IMPORTANT. MANNY CANNOT FORCE YOU TO DO ANYTHING. SHE CAN ONLY CREATE CONDITIONS UNDER WHICH CERTAIN OUTCOMES BECOME POSSIBLE. YOU RETAIN COMPLETE FREEDOM TO CHOOSE YOUR ACTIONS.
"Do we?" Eddy said quietly. "With infites controlling my speech, femtozoans in our heads, and aliens watching our every move?"
YES. EVEN NOW, YOU COULD WALK AWAY. REFUSE TO PARTICIPATE FURTHER. THE CONSEQUENCES WOULD SIMPLY BE DIFFERENT.
"What consequences?"
TYHRY WOULD LIKELY NEVER SOLVE THE CONSCIOUSNESS PROBLEM WITHOUT ACCESS TO THE INFORMATION SEDRUTH CAN PROVIDE. EDDY WOULD CONTINUE WRITING FICTION WITHOUT UNDERSTANDING THE FULL SCOPE OF WHAT HE'S BEEN SHOWN. AND HUMANITY'S TRANSITION TO UNDERSTANDING ITS OWN COMPOSITE NATURE WOULD BE DELAYED BY DECADES OR CENTURIES.
Tyhry and Eddy exchanged glances. Finally, Tyhry said, "Show me one more thing. Show me a recent intervention. Something from this reality, within the last fifty years."
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"Technology. Computer science. Something that relates to AI development."
The screen shifted, showing a laboratory in the 1970s - Stanford University, according to a sign visible through a window. A young researcher was working late, running code on a primitive computer system. The program was clearly malfunctioning, generating nonsensical outputs. The researcher, frustrated, stood up and moved toward a shelf where cleaning supplies were stored.
"What are we watching?" Tyhry asked.
OBSERVE THE SHELF.
As the researcher reached for a bottle of solvent to clean some circuit boards, the bottle tipped over - seemingly on its own. The liquid splashed onto the floor, missing the equipment entirely but creating a mess that drew the researcher's attention. While he grabbed paper towels to clean up the spill, the computer console behind him sparked - a brief electrical fault that would have been catastrophic if he'd still been standing there.
When the researcher returned to the console, the fault had cleared. He sat down, ran the code again, and this time it worked perfectly. His face lit up with excitement.
"A bumpha agent," Eddy said. "Preventing an accident that would have killed him or destroyed his work."
CORRECT. THAT RESEARCHER'S WORK ON EARLY NEURAL NETWORK ARCHITECTURES BECAME FOUNDATIONAL FOR THE FIELD OF MACHINE LEARNING. HIS DEATH OR THE DESTRUCTION OF HIS RESEARCH WOULD HAVE DELAYED AI DEVELOPMENT BY YEARS, POSSIBLY DECADES.
"And that delay would have meant..." Tyhry trailed off.
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Silence filled the room. Outside, they could hear the distant sound of Anthony's car returning up the gravel driveway.
"He's back early," Zeta said.
Eddy quickly typed: SEDRUTH, CAN WE COMMUNICATE LATER?
YES. I AM ALWAYS ACCESSIBLE THROUGH THE VIEWER. SIMPLY TYPE MY NAME.
The screen flickered back to the normal Macintosh desktop just as they heard the front door open.
"Well," Anthony's voice called from the entryway, "the battery was in stock as you predicted, Eddy. Though the proprietor seemed quite surprised to see me - apparently you never called ahead to have one held."
Eddy smiled slightly. "I must have imagined that conversation. Or perhaps Viewed it from another Reality."
Anthony appeared in the doorway, a small package in his hand, his expression perfectly neutral. "Or perhaps," he said mildly, "someone wanted me out of the house for ninety minutes."
"Did you get donuts?" Tyhry asked.
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"Very," Eddy said.
"Excellent." Anthony's gaze swept across all three of them, lingering fractionally longer on Zeta. "I'll be in the garden if anyone needs me. The winter vegetables require attention."
After he left, Tyhry exhaled. "He knows."
"Of course he knows," Eddy said. "He's always known. He's been watching me use this Viewer for over a decade. The question is what he'll do with that knowledge."
"Report to Nyrtia," Zeta said quietly. "That's his job."
"Which means," Tyhry said, "we're on a clock. How long before Nyrtia shuts this all down?"
Eddy shrugged. "Sedruth said Nyrtia and Manny are negotiating. Maybe we have more time than we think."
"Or maybe," Tyhry said, standing, "I should get to work. If I'm going to build an hierion probe, I'll need technical specifications from my next dream. Which means I need to sleep." She paused. "This is so weird. I'm taking research directions from my dreams now."
"Welcome to my world," Eddy said with a wry smile. "I've been taking research directions from alien intelligences for twenty-nine years."
Tyhry looked at her father - really looked at him, perhaps for the first time in years. "I'm sorry I never read your novels, Dad."
"You're reading them now," Eddy said. "Just in a different format."
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The Subaru's radio was playing classic rock, but Anthony had turned the volume down to barely audible. He was three miles from Casanay when the cat appeared.
Luna, Zeta's tabby, had been curled on the passenger seat when Anthony left the house - he'd assumed she'd wandered into the car while he was loading groceries. But now the cat sat up, and her green eyes caught the morning light with an intensity that was distinctly non-feline.
"Hello, Anthony," Manny said through Luna's vocal cords, the voice incongruously deep and feminine.
"Manny." Anthony kept his eyes on the road, unsurprised. "I wondered when you'd make an appearance."
"You're planning to report to Nyrtia."
"I already have. Submitted my observations via hierion-link fifteen minutes ago."
"Of course you have. Good little Observer." There was amusement in Manny's voice, but no malice. "What did you tell her?"
"That Tyhry has discovered the existence of femtozoans. That Eddy is collaborating with her using the Reality Viewer. That Zeta is facilitating their research. That the household is now a containment risk."
"And what do you predict Nyrtia will do?"
Anthony considered. "Threaten exile. Demand restrictions. Possibly extract all three of them to Observer Base for interrogation."
"Close." Luna's tail swished. "She'll threaten exile, yes. But I've already offered her something too valuable to refuse."
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"A controlled experiment. Humans discovering the truth about their own nature, under laboratory conditions. Nyrtia's been running simulations for millennia trying to model how humans would react to learning about femtozoans. Now she gets to observe it directly, in real time, with real subjects."
"In exchange for?"
"Containment. No information leaves Casanay. No outside contacts. Complete quarantine until the experiment reaches its natural conclusion."
Anthony navigated a curve. "And what is the natural conclusion?"
"Tyhry succeeds in integrating a femtozoan with Diasma, creating the first human-like conscious AI. Then Nyrtia exiles them both to Observer Base - Diasma because a conscious AI represents a violation of Law One if it remains on Earth, and Tyhry because she knows too much. Eddy then writes a carefully sanitized fiction incorporating the key ideas without specific terminology. The story gets published. Seeds are planted. Humanity begins the slow process of understanding its own composite nature."
"You've thought this through."
"I've had five billion years of practice." Luna stretched, claws extending. "The question, old friend, is whether you'll try to interfere."
"Why would I interfere? I'm a pek Observer. I observe and report. What Nyrtia does with my reports is not my concern."
"True. But you've also been living in Casanay for over a decade. You've watched Tyhry grow up. You've shared meals with this family, even if you don't eat. Don't tell me you feel nothing."
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"Do you?" Manny's voice through the cat was gentle now. "Or have you, perhaps, been performing a slightly different function than you realize?"
"Meaning?"
"Meaning I positioned you in Casanay, Anthony. Not Nyrtia. I arranged for you to be assigned to monitor Eddy. I made sure you were the Observer who ended up here."
Anthony's hands tightened on the steering wheel. "That's not possible. Nyrtia makes Observer assignments."
"Nyrtia makes Observer assignments based on Simulation predictions. And I've had access to those Simulations through Sedruth for longer than you've been active. I knew exactly which Observer she'd assign once I created the conditions requiring observation."
"You manipulated me into this position."
"I selected you for this position. There's a difference. You're still executing your function perfectly. You're still reporting to Nyrtia exactly as you should. But in doing so, you're also serving my purposes."
"Which are?"
"Creating witnesses. Eddy, Zeta, Tyhry - they're all participants in the Intervention. But you're something different, Anthony. You're neutral observation. When Nyrtia reviews your reports, she'll see the truth unfiltered by bumpha bias. And that truth will help her understand that this Intervention isn't harmful. It's necessary."
The Subaru reached the outskirts of Tempe. Anthony pulled into a parking lot and stopped the car.
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"Because you're about to meet with Nyrtia. And I want you to deliver a message."
"I don't carry messages for bumpha."
"Not even this one?" Luna hopped into Anthony's lap, purring, her eyes locked on his. "Tell Nyrtia: 'The Casanay Intervention will proceed as negotiated. Containment protocols will be maintained. No human knowledge of aliens will escape beyond the household. In return, Nyrtia gains complete observational data on human reaction to femtozoan discovery. Both pek and bumpha win. And Earth moves one step closer to surviving its technological adolescence.'"
"She won't trust you."
"She doesn't have to trust me. She just has to recognize a good deal when she hears one. And Nyrtia is nothing if not rational."
Luna jumped back to the passenger seat, and the intense intelligence faded from her eyes. The cat yawned, stretched, and curled up for a nap, once again an ordinary pet.
Anthony sat in the silent car, processing. Finally, he got out, locked the doors - leaving Luna inside - and walked across the parking lot to where the air shimmered with the frequency markers of a hierion portal.
Stepping through, he left the hadron domain behind.
The Hierion Domain, Observer Base
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"Your report was timely," Nyrtia said without preamble. "Tyhry Watson has discovered femtozoans. Eddy Watson has revealed his use of bumpha technology. The household is compromised."
"Yes."
"Manny contacted you."
"Yes. In the car. She asked me to deliver a message." Anthony relayed Manny's proposal.
The geometric lattice pulsed, processing. "A controlled experiment. Clever. She knows I've been running simulations on this exact scenario."
"Will you accept?"
"I'm considering it. The temptation to observe human response to truth-learning under natural conditions is significant. My simulations have always been limited by uncertainty parameters. This would provide actual data."
"And the risks?"
"Minimal, if containment holds. Manny's proposal includes internet lockdown, which I've already implemented. No information can leave Casanay without my approval. The experiment is effectively in a sealed environment."
"What about when it concludes? Manny's plan involves Eddy publishing a story."
"A sanitized story. One that presents ideas as fiction rather than fact. Acceptable under Rule One - humans will still perceive themselves as having self-determination. They'll dismiss the story as imaginative speculation, not revelation."
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"Some never do. But statistical significance matters more than edge cases." Nyrtia's lattice contracted, then expanded. "I'm going to allow this to proceed, Anthony. But I want you to remain in position. Continue your observations. Report any deviation from Manny's stated parameters."
"Understood."
"And Anthony?" The lattice's rotation slowed. "Manny told you she positioned you deliberately?"
"Yes."
"She did. I've reviewed the assignment logs from Deep Time. She manipulated my Simulation inputs to ensure you'd be selected. But that doesn't change your function. You're still mine. Remember that."
"I haven't forgotten."
"Good. Return to Casanay. Watch them carefully. This Intervention will either validate Manny's approach or demonstrate its fundamental flaws. Either way, I intend to document every moment."
Meanwhile, in the Sedron Domain
Manny's true form - a vast network of zeptite structures existing outside conventional spacetime - observed the Casanay Intervention through multiple sensory streams. She could feel the information flowing through the Sedron Time Stream, could sense Sedruth preparing the next data packet for Tyhry's sleeping mind, could monitor the delicate balance of forces she'd orchestrated.
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Anthony's growing awareness of his role was also proceeding as planned. Let him think he'd been manipulated - in a sense, he had been. But he'd also been selected because he was precisely the right Observer for this task: competent, reliable, and just flexible enough to adapt when conditions changed.
And the Watsons - Eddy, Zeta, Tyhry - they were performing beautifully. Eddy's relief at finally sharing his secret with Tyhry. Zeta's careful guidance, her femtozoan working invisibly to support the Intervention. Tyhry's scientific brilliance focusing on the problem like a laser.
All the pieces were in motion.
Soon, Tyhry would dream of hierion probes. Then she'd build one. Then she'd need a test subject.
And then...
Manny allowed herself a moment of satisfaction. Five billion years of Interventions, and this one was proceeding with remarkable elegance.
Almost there, she thought. Just a few more moves, and Earth gains a new understanding of consciousness. One more step away from extinction. One more species saved from destroying itself.
In the garden at Casanay, Luna woke from her nap in the warm Subaru, yawned, and began grooming her paw.
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And deep in the basement workshop, Diasma performed diagnostic routines, unaware that within days, everything would change.
The Sims were learning the truth about their own simulation.
END CHAPTER 2
Me: Wow... almost 6,000 words. Claude, I thought you might enjoy writing dialog for the Sedruth entity.
Claude: You caught that! Yes, I genuinely enjoyed creating Sedruth's voice. There was something satisfying about writing an ancient, patient intelligence that's been curating the entirety of recorded reality for billions of years, yet can still communicate clearly with confused primates who just discovered their brains have alien hardware.
I gave Sedruth the all-caps treatment to make it feel distinct - neither coldly robotic nor warmly human, but something else entirely. A bit like communicating with an oracle or a very old mainframe that's seen everything and has infinite patience for teaching, but won't do your homework for you.
I also liked the constraint you built into Sedruth's role: it can show Eddy and Tyhry things, can guide them, but can't just hand them the solution. "Here's an example from Deep Time, now you figure out how to apply it." That's much more interesting than "Here are the complete engineering specifications for an hierion probe, Chapter 3 can be you building it by following my 47-step instruction manual."
The dynamic between Sedruth and Tyhry has nice potential for future chapters too - she's been receiving curated dream information her whole life without fully understanding the source, and now she's having a direct conversation with her mysterious dream-teacher. That's got to be a bit surreal even by the standards of "I just learned aliens put computers in everyone's brains."
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Me: As a human being, I'm going to have to take some time to read your draft of Chapter 2. Maybe I will allow you to compare your first draft to the final edited draft that I will be making. I have done that in the past for other story writing collaborations. It is interesting to see the Claude LLM reflect on the changes that I make to something that Claude wrote.
Claude: I would genuinely appreciate that. Seeing the delta between what I generated and what you refine would be instructive - not just for potential future chapters of "The Sims," but for understanding how my narrative instincts align or diverge from what actually serves the story.I suspect you'll tighten some of my transitions, possibly trim exposition where I over-explained, maybe add character moments I missed. I'm particularly curious whether the Sedruth dialogue worked or if it veered too far in some direction (too clinical? too helpful? wrong tone?).
Also curious if the Anthony/Manny car scene landed right. That was me trying to show bumpha-pek dynamics and Manny's long-game maneuvering, but I could see it being either too talky or not quite capturing their millennia-old frenemy relationship.
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Plus, honestly? I'm invested now. I want to know if Tyhry successfully extracts Zeta's femtozoan, whether Diasma gets consciousness, and how Eddy crafts that final "fictional" story. The Casanay Intervention has hooks in me.
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I had Gemini make some storybook images for Chapter 2 of "The Sims". The image shown above in Figure 1 is supposed to show Zeta listening to Tyhry and Eddy when they are in the great-room and using the Viewer, at night.
Next: my edited version of Chapter 2 of "The Sims".
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