Showing posts with label Nemesis. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Nemesis. Show all posts

Feb 22, 2014

Fire Goddess

Angela
A few weeks ago I began contemplating the possibility of starting the Exode Trilogy with the story of Trysta and Ekcolir. Trysta and Ekcolir are magically brought together from across 10,000,000 years and 15,000 light-years. From their union springs the means to put an end to the conflict between Earth and the alien Huaoshy.

On a parallel track, I've come to recognize the need to provide "the editor" of the Exode Trilogy with a collaborating "information conduit", Angela, one of the clones of Ivory Fersoni. I had to invent the "Atlantis Clones" in order to make it possible for the story of the Exode Trilogy to be told. Ivory is very protective of her clones, and there is no real reason for Angela to have a public role in Exode.

Save the Planet!
I've long been amused by the back cover of my copy of Assignment: Nor'Dyren. Large print implores: "Save the Planet!" From far across space, Tollan Bailey and Laarica Johns are brought to the world Nor'Dyren where they collaborate to save the planet. Tollan is given a vision of this alien world in the guise of a vast sentient being. In this dream-like vision, only Tollan is allowed to enter the goddess Nor'Dyren. Once inside her iron womb, Tollan can use his silver screwdriver to heal the dying world.

Laarica and Tollan are brought together on Nor'Dyren through the scheming manipulations of the chairman of CalMega's Serendipity Project. Tollan is a problem for the giant CalMega corporation: he is not satisfied to have a job. Tollan wants work, honest hands-on labor. Nor'Dyren is perfect for Tollan, a world full of work just waiting for him. Nobody on Nor'Dyren ever repairs the aging machines, so Tollan's skills as an experienced repairman are in need.

As soon as Tollan is on Nor'Dyren he is stricken with a strange illness. How could an alien virus stricken him? If not a virus, perhaps an invisible nanite probe enters his body and induces delirium. While his brain is in a hyperpyretic state, an "accident" occurs; he strikes down a citizen of Nor'Dyren, thus creating an excuse for Laarica to be sent out from Earth to join Tollan in his task of healing Nor'Dyren.

In a stroke of "luck", the first Nor'Dyren factory that Tollan visits is supervised by a Gonnegon who happens to be familiar with an Earthly philosopher. Coincidentally, some of the factory workers know Patt, who turns out to be a second generation revolutionary known to the head of Nor'Dyren's government. Perhaps the largest "coincidence" of all is that Tollan "just happens" to end up staying in the part of Nor'Dyren near the fantastic "burial chamber" that holds the secrets to Nor'Dyrenese history. Are all these happy "coincidences" just random chance or has some unseen power conspired to "save the planet"?

Cadwal Chronicles
Flitz
The planet Cadwal is a world so full of exuberant life that the Naturalist Society set it aside, for all time, as a nature preserve. However, after a mere 1000 years the world is in danger of being tamed and over-run by humans.

Can a planet defend itself? Miraculously, Cadwal gives birth to Glawen and Wayness, and the planet's natural beauty seduces Lewyn Barduys...between them, these three have the drive, connections and resources to rescue Cadwal from impending doom.

The fate of one additional thread of support for Cadwal, Lewyn's "associate", Felitzia Stronsi, hung on the outcome of a terrible storm that destroyed Bainsey Castle on the world Rosalia. Left an orphan, "Flitz" came into the care of Lewyn. Vance goes to considerable pains to depict Rosalia as a world full of native life forms with inexplicable powers.

Tourist attractions on Rosailia included trees that grow seven hundred feet tall. High above the tourists live "tree-waifs", nearly invisible creatures who make "stink-balls" which they drop on the gawking humans below. Glawan's partner, Eustace Chilke, explains that cameras fail to focus on tree-waifs. Chilke tells Glawen and their boss, Bodwyn Wook a story about a scientific study of tree-waifs. Working from a study platform settled into one of the tall trees, a team of scientists daily reported back to their central base. On a day when their messages suddenly stopped, investigators found the scientists three weeks dead in their tree-top observation station.

If we take telepathic and paranormal phenomena for granted, if we assume that telepathy is perhaps a feature of the universe not yet understood by humanity but widespread among life forms on the many worlds in our galaxy, then why not imagine a far-flung network of telepathic connections between worlds? Could Cadwal telepathically reach out to Rosalia and attract the attention of Lewyn Barduys, just the man who can save Cadwal?

Nemesis
In his novel Nemesis, Asimov shows Earthlings struggling to save Earth from the danger posed by a red dwarf star that is going to enter the Solar System. But in orbit around the dwarf star is the planet Erythro, home to a form of life that might be a billion years old. Is it the vast telepathic mind of Erythro that reaches out to Earth and creates the means for the Earthlings to "save their planet"? Might the human species be a "device" crafted by the telepathic mind of Erythro, a mechanism that is able to produce the technological means to save Erythro from destruction?

Did the telepathic mind of Erythro reach out and guide the evolution of primates on Earth, create the human species and even endow a few select humans with telepathic powers?

Exode
If Earth is embedded in a "paracosmos" of sedronic matter, a "sedronic domain" where the Huaoshy have access to a complete record of Earth's existence through time, could Grean be given the task of making sure that we Earthlings are provided with an account of the hidden history of Earth?
The third eye of Shiva.
Grean
On Nor'Dyren, when Tollan has his vision of a goddess dispensing heat to the worthy residents of an icy world, his feverish mind half imagines the broken water heater in his bath as this iron goddess of warmth. What if such a "religious vision" was not just the random construct of his over-heated brain, what if it was transmitted into his mind from outside?

For Exode I've been having fun imagining how cultural contamination might influence Earthly religions.

If the Kac'hin like Grean can exert some control over the sedronic symbionts that exist inside all humans, then they can exercise control over the fates of we "mere mortals" simply by exerting their will and using their thoughts to operate the bimanoid interface. How would primitive Earthlings interpret such power of the Kac'hin?

In older stories set in the Exodemic Fictional Universe I imagined that Overseers could send swarms of nanites into the brains of Earthlings and cause them to suddenly forget or stop moving or pass out. What if the Kac'hin are endowed with even higher powers such as the ability to activate a "bimanoid interface" for the sedronic domain and instantly teleport people away from Earth?

There might be times when a Kac'hin would want to intimidate primitive Earthlings. Rather than simply teleport away obstreperous folk, it might be useful to make a display of it. A flashing light emitted from the head, a flutter of ash where the unruly target was standing a moment before. Thus might be born tales of a god like Shiva.

Trysta and Ekcolir
Trysta presents both a challenge and an opportunity for Grean. At first, it is not clear that Grean will be able to contain Gohrlay and the positronic robots who have sent Trysta into the primitive era of Earth's history. It appears that Humanity will become just one more species that extinguishes itself through its application of advanced technologies. However, Ekcolir is crafted as the tool that can save Earth and allow humans a chance to spread among the stars.

The Huaoshy are willing to grant humans this opportunity because the time travel technology that was developed by Gohrlay gives the Huaoshy the means to shift the dimensional structure of the universe to a more favorable configuration.

From our human perspective, the Huaoshy are the true Fire Gods. Gohrlay makes the ultimate sacrifice in order to placate the Gods and win a future for Humanity.

The Huaoshy are remote from we primitive humans. Within their sedronic domain of existence, the Huaoshy have very little interest in the mundane affairs of our material universe. The pek recognize the importance of Gohrlay's revolt and craft the Kac'hin as an interface between Humanity and the Huaoshy.

Inevitably, humans are confused by the Kac'hin who seem so nearly human and mystified by their advanced powers. I originally imagined that Kach becomes bored with the Prelands on Hemmal, but it would be more fun to allow her to reveal something of her special Kac'hin abilities to the Prelands. The Prelands might begin to treat her like a prophet. Finally, Kach must depart from Hemmal, certain that she can learn nothing of value from the Prelands about the Creators.

Related reading. "Mud" by Kimberly Davis.

2015 blog post: Sentient Planets

Jun 12, 2013

Slow Science Fiction

cover design
I've been agonizing over the subconscious telepathic experiences of Gohrlay, a Neanderthal who lives on the Moon. At the start of The Foundations of Eternity, Gohrlay is haunted by the idea that her orbho assistant Nan can "read her mind" using telepathy.

What if some people suddenly attained a new "mental ability" like telepathy? Isaac Asimov explored that theme in both Nemesis and Forward the Foundation.

In The Slowers (slowers.org), Joski Cottee imagines that a form of "mental time travel" suddenly appears in the human population. Spoilers follow, so stop here and read The Slowers before reading the next section of this blog post or skip ahead to the following section.
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The Science of Slowing
Several decades ago I read a story in which two lovers found that they were able to slow the flow of time whenever their bodies were touching...that is, time slowed for everyone except them!

In The Slowers, Cottee presents readers with the idea that some special people, "Slowers", have the ability to mentally live in the past and, "time spent in a Slow, goes a lot slower than the actual ‘real-time’ used". For a Slower, 15 minutes of daydreaming in the present might provide enough "cognitive time" for a Slow that includes all of the rich experience encompassing an entire rock concert of the past. Is it ironic that Slowers have faster cognition than the rest of us?

Cottee writes: "Slowers want a longer more meaningful life experience and nature has provided them with the means to make this possible,"  and: "Slowers, as we know, use their daydreams to visit events from the past."

Just exactly how does the phenomenon of Slowing suddenly arise? I'm not sure that we are supposed to ask this question, but in Chapter 8 of The Slowers we are told: "it is thought that it was the fast pace of life and density of information, as well as the impact of nutritional changes and certain environmental chemicals, that encouraged this development of the human brain".

Cottee introduces a type of "inertia for time" that reminds me of how Asimov envisioned the course of events in Time naturally resisting changes. In their daydreams, run-of-the-mill Slowers can interact with people in the past, but Time automatically "heals itself" and the future is never changed.

After the first few Slowers appear, the number of Slowers in the world just keeps increasing. Maybe Sheldrake could explain that.

In Chapter 2 of The Slowers, Dr. Gansoni experiences something like a Reality Change. Readers learn that in addition to run-of-the-mill Slowers who can only watch the past, there are "Super Slowers" who, while visiting the past, can change the course of time.

Reality Changes
The End of Eternity
In Isaac Asimov's The End of Eternity, the Eternals could watch Reality Changes take place either from within the protected spacetime bubble of Eternity or by having themselves protected by a personal "temporal generator" which if worn while in Time, would protect you from the effects of a Reality Change.

Super Slowers
Apparently the Super Slowers have no such protection: can they change their own past and eliminate themselves from Reality?

Why is Dr. Gansoni able to notice when the past is changed?

How do the secretive folks at the research facilities of the mysterious Cansiis (operating as an offshore corporate entity only registered in the "Free Alaskan State") detect ripples in time caused by Super Slowers? Apparently by taking advantage of the fact that "magnetic centrifuges running at very high velocities" can create something like Asimov's Eternity, a bubble outside of normal Time.

In The End of Eternity, even the Eternals did not seem to understand the science and technology that made time travel possible. I like to imagine that it was positronic robots who invented time travel and those robots simply provided humans with access to the technology. Eventually, the robots realized that time travel is a trap: if humans are allowed to use time travel technology then they eventually manage to cause the extinction of the human species.
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Gohrlay and morphic resonance
Don't ask me to explain Sheldrake's concept of "morphic resonance". However, in my own selfish way I like to use that term in the context of conceptualizing my own fictional scientific account of how telepathy might be possible. I like to imagine that two brains with similar structures and activity patterns can more easily develop "T-particle resonance" and achieve telepathic communication.
T-particles can move between two locations (for example, the Sun and a brain) by conventional propagation through normal space, and have been shown to be a normal component of the ultrafast solar wind, moving much slower than the speed of light. However, T-particles (and virtual T-particles) can also interact by absorbing and releasing ultrarelativistic twitinos that can propagate through compact dimensions, allowing very rapid transfers of information over long distances. Such telepathic information transfer depends on twitino resonance between arrays of T-particles in two telepathically coupled brains, which can be mediated by telastids (see below).

T-particles can exist in different energy states. Large numbers of both Band I and Band II solar T-particles reach the Earth. Band III solar T-particles almost all decay to lower energy states before they reach the Earth. This makes Band III particularly useful for human telepathy. The Antenna/Reaction Center 2 of Type B telastids specifically detects Band III T-particles.
When high energy T-particles convert to lower energy T-particle states there is release of two paired twitinos. Similarly, pairs of twitinos that "resonate" can combine with a low energy T-particle and boost it to a higher energy state. Type C telastids use twitino resonance to allow for conscious telepathic communication of language-like information.

Animals on Earth originally had a simple capacity to detect T-particles coming from the Sun. The basic sensory receptor (a modified neuron) contained telastids, a type of organelle that is able to convert Band II solar T-particles to Band I T-particles and capture the released energy as useful chemical energy that can modulate neuronal activity. This original sensitivity for T-particles allowed animals to sense the location of the Sun and make use of that sensation for orientation in their environment. In more complex brains, T-particle receptor cells were linked into complex neural networks that allowed processing of telepathic signals from other brains, signals that were useful for social cohesion, but almost exclusively among highly social apex predators.

An interesting feature of telepathic communication as depicted by Asimov in Foundation and Earth is that telepathy between elements of the forming Galaxia was not restricted by distance. When T-particles (and virtual T-particles) interact by exchanging ultrarelativistic twitinos then a signal can propagate through compact dimensions, allowing very rapid transfers of information over long distances. Long range language-like telepathic information transfer depends on twitino resonance between arrays of T-particles in two telepathically coupled brains (see Type C telastids, below).

Telastids
Telastids are central to the biological mechanism of telepathy in humans. Telastids are a type of organelle that is structurally similar to mitochondria. They originated by endosymbiosis. The original free-living precursor organism obtained energy by efficiently catalyzing the conversion of Band II solar T-particles to Band I T-particles. These organisms had Antenna/Reaction Complex 1, but they all became extinct when molecular oxygen levels became high on Earth. A T-particle Antenna/Reaction Complex has a precise and unusual molecular configuration which can catalyze changes in T-particle energy level. Of critical importance for The Foundations of Eternity, positronic brain circuits can also efficiently interact with T-particles. Three types of telastids can be found inside humans:

Type A. They retain a rudimentary capacity to detect solar radiation, but they have been evolutionarily modified to specialize for using chemical energy to facilitate the boosting of Band II solar T-particles to the Band III energy level (see the diagram, above). This conversion of Band II T-particles to Band III T-particles is used to allow unconscious exchanges of T-particles between humans for creating social cohesion and allowing for assessment of fitness. This capacity for Band III T-particle production evolved in parallel with Type B telastids. The capacity for solar radiation detection depends on a rudimentary form of twitino resonance by which solar twitinos modulate the rate of Band III T-particle production. Most of the Band III T-particles produced are on the edge of the band and they quickly fall back to the Band II energy range with the release of a pair of twitinos. In Neanderthals, neurons in Broca's area heavily express these telastids so that some individuals could subconsciously transmit twitinos carrying language-like information. Such transmissions from Gohrlay to R. Gohrlay allowed the positronic robots to learn that the orbho were created by the Huaoshy.

Type B. These have Antenna/Reaction Complex 2 (A/RC2, see diagram to the right) which is specialized for interacting with Band III T-particles. They allow social mammals to detect Band III T-particles produced by other animals. These telastids are only expressed in neurons that cannot directly contribute to conscious brain activity. In humans, telepathic signals received by Type B telastid are used unconsciously to promote social cohesion and allow assessment of fitness.

Type C. These were created by genetic engineering, starting from Type A telastids. This genetic engineering was achieved by positronic robots and Type C telastids became particularly important during their 20,000 year-long project to create Galaxia. These telastids were designed to be expressed in Wernicke's area and allow for conscious telepathic communication of language-like information.

Humans with Type C telastid-mediated telepathy were mostly involved in the Galaxia project, but some were also used to launch the Second Foundation. Type C telastids were designed to use twitino resonance for the production of Band III T-particles. As shown in the diagram (to the right) the required twitino resonance involves matched patterns of twitino production by two telepathic brains.

There are two important kinds of telastid mutations:

T-particles in The Search for Kalid
Loss of function mutants. There is an important class of loss of function mutations that prevents Type A telastids from using chemical energy to generate Band III T-particles. In some cases, the mutation only prevents Typa A telastids from being expressed by neurons in Broca's area. People who have these mutations are "pure telepathic sensitives" with no ability to consciously transmit language-like telepathic signals.

Gain of function mutants. Some humans have mutations that allow their Type C telastids to produce Band III T-particles by means of twitino resonance between solar twitinos and twitinos that they generate with their Type A telastids. Almost always these mutants have lost the ability to control where their Type C telastids are expressed, so most of their T-particle production does not reflect their conscious brain activity. Such mutants can often produce very large numbers of T-particles. These mutants played an important role in the history of telepathy. For thousands of years the high levels of T-particle production by some modern humans played a role in the spread of Homo sapiens across Earth and the rapid displacement of Neanderthal populations. High levels of unconscious T-particle production disrupt the ability of telepathic minds to efficiently communicate language-like information. Only when these mutants are “silenced” can true telepaths have a chance to develop their telapathic skills.

Gohrlay contemplates positronic brains.
As a Neanderthal, Gohrlay had high levels of telastids and a capacity for subconscious telepathic communication. Gohrlay was specifically selected by Orbho Anagro as a clone of a previously well-studied Observer Base resident who displayed efficient interactions with the type of nanites that were used by the orbho to erase human memories. Anagro's choice unwittingly led to the first positronic brain having a high capacity for telepathy

The Foundations of Eternity
The Huaoshy were well aware of the existence of "T-particles", but until the positronic robots of Earth discovered their utility for telepathy the Huaoshy believed that T-particles were a rather uninteresting type of hierion. After the Huaoshy performed dimensional engineering in order to make faster-than-light space travel possible, T-particles became sensitive to a fundamental asymmetry by which positrons could allow for sophisticated quantum computational decoding of the information content of T-particle-based signals.

When Orbho Anagro was studying the human capacity for inventing and using tools, a small group of human scientists was established on the Moon. Anagro did not allow the humans to develop electronics and nanorobotics, but even Anagro was intrigued when the humans started advancing the new discipline of positronics.

When human research into positronic brains stalled, Anagro pushed that research project to completion. It was an accidental discovery when R. Gohrlay found that positronic brains are particularly well suited for manipulating T-particles. The consequences of that discovery, including how it leads to the invention of time travel, are explored in The Foundations of Eternity and Exode.

Slow Science Fiction
One of the first science fiction stories I ever read was The Skylark of Space. The story of how Dick Seaton invents space travel is what might be called "fast science fiction": the hero makes a dramatic technological advance with very little effort. Such fast-paced and startling scientific and technological advances are popular in science fiction. Readers would get bored if they had to slog through the complete story of how thousands of people developed space travel technology over the course of many decades.

I've always been embarrassed by "fast science fiction" because it is not true to the way science really works. That embarrassment has played an important role in my gravitation towards stories that are set in the Exodemic Fictional Universe. In such stories the god-like Huaoshy have been around for about a billion years. If the plot of a story calls for a sudden scientific discovery or burst of technological progress then we can always arrange for some "cultural contamination" and let the critical knowledge leak from the the top down, in the direction from the scientifically advanced Huaoshy to the primitive yet heroic human protagonist (hooray!).

If "fast science fiction" depicts the pace of science and technological progress as being unreasonably quick, then what is "slow science fiction"? Here are some examples: 1) Jack Vance speculating about the evolution of humans over the course of 50,000 years, 2) Arthur Clarke suggesting that aliens altered the course of primate evolution millions of years ago, and 3) Isaac Asimov depicting the 20,000 year-long development of Galaxia by R. Daneel.

One of the great changes that has come with the development of science is recognition of the vast sweep of human evolution. Slow science fiction stories respect the idea that human behavior has evolved over the course of millions of years.

Many fantasy stories involve amazing "mutations" that suddenly create a "superhero" with super-human behavioral capacity. What about the appearance of "Slowers"? Has Cottee provided readers with a scientific foundation for The Slowers or are readers invited into a fantasy?

For many people it doesn't matter, as long as they enjoy the story. Just say "mutant" and switch off your brain...and get on with the romp.

Magic
Moon Hammer
As a "hard science fiction" fan, I'm still struggling to expand my interests and learn to appreciate genres such as horror and fantasy. In Alan Marling's list of 10 reasons why people like fantasy as a genre, only #3, magic, is a problem for me. All of the others (including imagination, escape, wonder, freedom, adventure, and fun) are also part of other types of fiction. In his novel Contact, Carl Sagan described aliens who shared the human desire to experience "the numinous".

Also on Marling's list is "limitless possibilities". By Clarke's third law, science fiction stories can always use imagined advanced technology to move stories past limits and introduce what seems like magic to the ignorant primitives. For me, there is a quantum leap between belief in magic and the existence of a mystery that seems magical. Marling says that he'd like to have magical powers.

Exode fantasy
I'm "fantasy blind" in the sense that I can't kick back and enjoy a story that involves a magical or supernatural force. For me, "nature" is everything that exists. We can all imagine nonexistent things and supernatural forces, but from my personal perspective I'm baffled by the prospect of trying to build a coherent story around magical plot elements that are not constrained by reality. When I gaze upon other people's fantasies I become distracted by the lack of rules and I can't generate any interest in the story.

Yes, I like the limits that are imposed by reality. In particular, I like the fact that as humans we can find ourselves to be ignorant of how reality works, but by study and hard work it is possible to figure out nature.

by Sebastian Grzyw
For me, this is the most important part of being human: we can figure out the rules, we can participate in the process by which the universe becomes self-aware. From my perspective, the fantasy genre throws away the importance of science and the anchor of reality....and I want those things.

John in Fantasyland
So, I'm still in search of a way that I can position myself where I want to write a fantasy story. As a start, I admit that I enjoyed reading Perfectly Formal, a story within Asimov's short story Cal. Surely I can write a fantasy story within the story Exode.

Thomas becomes acquainted with Isaac Asimov and his wife, Janet. Thomas is a science fiction writer, but he writes a fantasy story that will attract the attention of Parthney. 

When I was young I tried reading one of Asimov's Lucky Starr novels...I don't remember which one: Lucky Starr and the Pirates of the Asteroids, Lucky Starr and the Oceans of Venus, Lucky Starr and the Rings of Saturn...

Asimov wrote those novels under the pen name "Paul French". Similarly, Thomas publishes his fantasy novel using the name Saul Greek. The title is: Daveed the Luk'ie and the Humans of Earth.

"Daveed the Luk'ie" is inspired by the names David 'Lucky' Starr and Daneel. Luk'ru is the name of the planet in the Andromeda galaxy where the humanoid Kac'hin were developed and trained for their mission to Earth.

When Asimov is on the Moon he meets Captain Hooski, the Kac'hin who commands Many Sails during the mission to Earth.

When Asimov travels back in time, he helps Hooski defeat the positronic robots who took control of Earth. With that mission complete, there were then two Asimovs on Earth: the younger Asimov and the older Asimov who traveled into his own past.

The older Asimov uses alien nanites to disguise himself as John Campbell. Later, when Noÿs Lambent takes her son Thomas to meet with "Campbell", all hell breaks lose. The alien nanites from "Campbell" end up inside Thomas, so he becomes aware of the fact that aliens have long been visiting Earth. Thomas writes Daveed the Luk'ie and the Humans of Earth as a fantasy account of Hooski's mission to Earth.

2014 non-review
When Parthney realizes that the "undead Oshy" are the Huaoshy, he suspects that "Saul Greek" is one of Asimov's pen names and that somehow Asimov knows about the alien Huaoshy.

2014 non-review: human-alien hybrids, oh, my!

Mar 5, 2010

A Clarke number of 2?

According to "Which science fiction writer are you?"
I am:
Gregory Benford
A master literary stylist who is also a working scientist.
That "quiz" also says, "The real Greg Benford once took this quiz, and it told him he was Arthur C. Clarke."

I've only read one of Benford's books, Timescape. I had a personal problem while reading Timescape because, as a biologist, I found the "crisis" that drove the story (biodisaster in 1998) to be less than satisfying. This is the same kind of problem I had with Asimov's novel Nemesis, for which I've written a review in which I expressed unhappiness with Asimov's attempt to motivate the reader by shouting "in 5,000 years the sky is falling". Asimov's book (Nemesis) was "saved" by introducing us to an interesting extraterrestrial life form with telepathic abilities. However, the ending of Timescape had no redeeming features. I was particularly unable to swallow the idea of a school kid going to pick up reading material and preventing President Kennedy from being shot.

After having read Timescape I was reluctant to purchase Benford's Foundation Saga novel, Foundation's Fear. However, I was (and still am) intrigued by the way that Asimov left us with a hint (in Foundation and Earth) about a coming clash between humanity and extraterrestrials. I was intrigued by the back cover of Foundation's Fear where it says that Yugo Amaryl is an alien.

I worked very hard to read Foundation's Fear, but I could not get past page 289 (my copy is 597 pages long). I'd like to ask this of anyone who was able to read the entire novel: does Benford actually depict Yugo as an alien? Ever since I started writing The Start of Eternity I've felt I should make another attempt to finish reading Foundation's Fear. I'd like to know the details of the kind of interaction that Benford imagined between Daneel and extraterrestrial life forms.

When I got stuck at the start of Part 4 of Foundation's Fear I scanned ahead and found Part 5. I was put-off by the idea that people could have their minds transferred into chimps. This was the "step too far" for me. I had been able to grit my teeth and accept all of the other alterations made by Benford to Asimov's Foundation story, but this was too much. The mere existence of this sort of mind-transfer technology is not consistent with Asimov's Foundation Saga. I can accept switching from "hyperjumps" to "worm holes" for faster-than-light travel and I can accept that computers and industrial robots were working quietly in the background of Asimov's Foundation stories, but it seems to me that you cannot toss into the mix just any old technology that strikes your fancy. If you have the technical ability to transfer a human mind into a chimp brain then you do not end up with Toran Darell II later using primitive methods like brain wave analysis to study human minds. I walked away from Foundation's Fear at that point. The book cover said that Foundation's Fear was a continuation of Asimov's Foundation Saga. No, that is a lie. In his afterword, Benford wrote that he tried to add to the sweep of the Foundation Saga, but I think he swept it out the door and went in new directions that clash with Asimov's story.

I remain astounded by the fact that my copy of Foundation's Fear has no table of contents. The book is divided into "parts", and if there was a table of contents I probably would have quickly made my way to "Part 6 Ancient Fogs" and found Benford's aliens (I bought the book in order to see his idea for how to introduce aliens into the Foundation Saga) before growing tired of all the slogging in the early part of the book. I agree with this review: "Some of the Joan-Voltaire sections are muddled and confusing, and the whole chimpanzee adventures feels tacked on."

I'm amused by the idea that Benford took the "Which science fiction writer are you?" quiz and was told that he is like Arthur C. Clarke. I'm a fan of the way Clarke often depicted extraterrestrials as being vastly advanced beyond us and having only a very small interest in primitive creatures like humans...that is my kind of solution to the Fermi Paradox. Today I skimmed through the final parts of Foundation's Fear and I like the idea that when humanity spread into the galaxy it ran into artificial life forms that had out-lived their biological parent species.

Arthur C. Clarke
I take a different approach to the conflict between humanity and space aliens in The Start of Eternity, but I really like the idea that robots with positronic brains (such as Daneel) become aware of alien intelligences before humans do. I do not think it fits into Asimov's Saga to say that Seldon became aware of the aliens, so in The Start of Eternity I stay true to the idea (from Asimov's Foundation and Earth) that Trevize is the first human in the Foundation Era to start thinking seriously about contact with aliens.

Related Reading 
Arthur C. Clarke's Childhood's End
100 years of Clarke