Showing posts with label characters. Show all posts
Showing posts with label characters. Show all posts

May 1, 2022

Recurring Characters

Donovan and Powell on
Mercury.   image source

Back in 2010, I had a blog post called "Plotcharacter" in which I commented on the relative importance of plot and characters in science fiction stories. I'm rather amazed at the low frequency of recurring characters in science fiction stories. 

I suppose that in the era when almost all science fiction appeared in magazines, there was not much hope that readers would remember previously published stories that used the same character(s). Still, if you have invented an interesting character, why not recycle?

Arcot, Morey and Wade
original cover art by Ric Binkley
 Back in the 1970s, the first recurring characters that I came across in science fiction were Isaac Asimov's robot trouble-shooters Gregory Powell and Mike Donovan. Asimov is not known for his human characters, and besides Susan Calvin, the robots in I, Robot are more memorable than the human characters.

In his first published story "Marooned off Vesta", Asimov had Moore, Brandon and Shae struggling for survival. Then, 20 years later, Asimov published another story called "Anniversary" which brought back Moore, Brandon and Shae for a new adventure.

Back in the 1970s, I also read most of Asimov's "juvenile" planetary adventure stories about David Starr and John "Bigman" Jones exploring the Solar System.

In the Ekcolir Reality.
Original cover art by
Earle Bergey, Wojtek Siudmak and
also see this french cover.
Last October, I commented on "The Double Minds" by John W. Campbell, a story that features the recurring characters Penton and Blake. Campbell also published a series of Arcot, Morey and Wade stories. I suppose Asimov was strongly influenced by Campbell and mentored to make use of recurring characters.

I've also previously commented on all of Jack Vance's Magnus Ridolph stories. However, Vance is probably most well know for his character Kirth Gersen who was the protagonist in all five of Vance's Demon Prince novels. I wonder if Vance had more fun writing his stories about Gersen or those that followed the life of Glawen Clattuc.

I suspect that Asimov's most popular recurring character was probably Daneel, the positronic robot. Daneel became something of a guardian for the entire human species and was written by Asimov so as to be a humanoid robot who had an admirable human-like personality.

interior art by Leo Summers 
Lefty Baker.
I recently read the six "Lefty Baker" stories that were published by Roger Phillip Graham between 1947 and 1961. Readers are told that Lefty never graduated from high school and his I.Q. is 84 + 420i, making him the "greatest imaginary genius in the known universe". In "... But Who Knows Huer, or Huen?" (1961), readers are told that Lefty's 420i can be measured with a psychometer, a device which measures his ability to have hunches that turn out to be true.

Poor Lefty has a series of encounters with assorted crazed psychologists, inventors and aliens... all of which lead to comic adventures and it seems that Lefty is destined to remain institutionalized for the rest of his life, either because he is a magical magnet for weird events or because he is simply too imaginative.

James the robot with a loose nut. Interior art by Leo Summers
I've previously commented on the 1950 short story "Love My Robot" by Roger Graham. The third Lefty Blake story (1949) was called "The Insane Robot". Having previously gotten himself locked up in a mental institution through his "chance" run-ins with an inventor who devised a wish-granting machine and a scientist who made immortal rabbits, now Lefty meets a robot, a mechanical man, named James. The robot explains that he was invented by professor Hamfeather.

However, readers are told that since James believes in impossible things (such as dehydrated water), Hamfeather institutionalized the poor robot. That cover story begins to fall apart when Lefty has a visitor: Helen, the cute niece of professor Hamfeather. She asks Lefty to help James by being his friend, explaining that is just what the robot needs to get over his psychosis.

James tells Lefty to start taking notes on the staff of the mental institution and soon enough that is taken as a good sign of mental health and Lefty is released into the custody of professor Hamfeather.

Huat (left), Marge and Lefty (bottom).
interior art for "It's Like This..."
Sadly, I get the feeling that either 1) "The Insane Robot" was truncated by the editor or 2) Graham simply got tired of the story and quit writing. However, it may be that the correct interpretation of this story is that the whole series of events with James, Helen and professor Hamfeather was all the creation of Lefty's imagination. The next story in the Lefty Baker series, "It's like this..." begins with Lefty back in the mental institution as if none of the events in "The Insane Robot" ever happened.

Ancient Aliens. For "It's Like This...", Lefty meets an alien named Huat who explains that long ago humans were sent to colonize Earth, but something went wrong and the species degenerated. 

Lefty helps make
immortal rabbits.
interior art by Bob Keyes
However, Huat has discovered that Lefty and Marge (she's the cute switchboard operator at the mental institution) have the needed genes to get the human race back on track. Huat ends up using his advanced alien technology to quickly make millions of babies with the "corrected" genes, and Marge picks out one to raise as her own. Sadly, at the end of the story, poor Lefty is still locked up in the mental institution.

Graham clearly had a lot of fun crafting the Lefty Baker stories, but I suspect he was mostly having fun at the expense of over-used plot elements from the science fiction genre. I think Graham probably also wrote his female characters Helen and Marge so as to poke fun at the way human sexuality was often made invisible in the pulp magazines. When Lefty and Helen kiss, readers are told nothing. Later, readers are made aware that the kiss took place, but only in Lefty's memory of the event. When Huat must mix together Lefty's and Marge's genes, Lefty and Marge seem to black-out, so readers don't get even a dark-washed sex scene. Later, Marge is making plans to marry Lefty, but he gets thrown back into the mental institution and in the next story of the series it is again as if Lefty's latest girlfriend (Marge) never existed.

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Jan 4, 2020

Character Change Challenge

The planet Retfai.
Ten years ago, I blogged about achieving a balance between plot development and the development of story characters. I've always been more interested in the exploration of ideas through fiction than developing characters. When I write science fiction stories, the characters arrive just in time to fulfill their role in the plot and I normally give minimal attention to their needs. In this blog post and the next one, I want to challenge myself to invent a new character first and then explore how the needs of that character can perturb the events inside the Exode Saga.

Portia was the first character who came alive and began to take over a story that I was writing. Sometimes the demands of a character can become annoying and in the past I've often stifled demanding characters who began to take control of a plot. I want to challenge myself to experiment with allowing a character to instruct me and teach me things I don't know.

Can Gladia stop Vasilla's evil robots?
Isaac Asimov was an advocate for writing novels in which there were no obvious "good guys" or "bad guys". However, some of his characters were easy to categorize as having a screw loose. Secretary Balkis had his mind telepathically examined by Joseph Schwartz, revealing that he was as homicidal maniac, ready to use biological warfare to kill trillions of people. Vasilia Fastolfe (also known as Vasilia Aliena) has her mind examined by telepathic positronic robots who judge her to be such a danger to Humanity that they rewire her brain. The straw that broke that camel's back was when Vasilia tried to kill Daneel.

Several years ago, my character Sachiz was starting to become annoying and I wrote her out of the Exode Saga. Here in 2020, I want to develop a new character with the ability to annoy me and this time I want to let that character wreak a bit more havoc than I allowed Sachiz.

     More Firsts
In the Ekcolir Reality
The secret of going
hairless: the defollifier.
Original cover art by Lloyd Rognan
and see this
The first wikifiction blog post with a character's name in the title was "August Sennor on Time". However, the most interesting character in The End of Eternity is Noÿs Lambent. I decided that Noÿs must be an Asterothrope, a human variant from the far future; her original name was Skaña. Skaña adopted several different names during the times when she was actively engaged in her various time travel missions.

The Skaña Intervention
When Skaña was living in the 20th century on Earth, she used the name Trysta Iwedon. Trysta became an important character in the Exode Saga.

A week after I posted "August Sennor on Time", I included the name of a famous science fiction writer in the title of a blog post: "Asimov's struggle with aliens". That blog post is one of the most frequently visited pages on this blog.

Azynov the replicoid
I could not resist making Asimov be a character in the Exode Saga. I sent Asimov back in time to meet himself. As a time traveler, Asimov helped initiate the Reality Change that ended the Foundation Reality and brought into existence the Asimov Reality.

Later, a replicoid of Asimov was created and sent into the Asimov Reality Simulator. To avoid confusion with the real Asimov, that replicoid was called "Azynov". Inside the AR Simulator, Azynov works with Yōd to investigate the origins of human telepathy.

Hana
The first of my own characters to appear in the title of a wikifiction blog post was Franny. Franny, a character in Exodemic, was taken off of Earth and exposed to Genesaunt culture. After departing from Earth, Franny had the task of trying to understand the dynamics of the planet-wide chess game that is played by the Interventionists and the Overseers.

Later, I wanted another character, similar to Franny, who could be integrated into the story Exode. That new character became Hana. The only problem with Hana was that someone had to do the dirty work and teleport her off of Earth. That "someone" became Parthney, one of the clones of Thomas Iwedon.

                          The Editor
Earth's Reality Chain
I was having so much fun with Asimov as a character in my stories, I eventually tossed off all restraints and wrote myself into the Exode Saga. Other related characters followed, including Rylla. However, I'm now thinking that it would be useful to challenge myself to create a new and different type of character.

Change Challenge 2020
Each year I create an annual change challenge (for example, see 2017). For 2020, I want to create a new interesting alien character.

I have an annual search for interesting Hollywood aliens (SIHA). I was amused to see that my local newspaper ranked Arrival as the second best movie of the past decade. The heptapods in Arrival are cool, but I'm dreaming of an interesting humanoid alien.

Other things to avoid
I like to imagine that Asimov's fictional universe of the Foundation is based on events that took place in the Foundation Reality. That Reality was terminated by Grean, a Kac'hin. However, the Kac'hin were created as a human variant and they are not really alien enough for the 2020 change challenge.

I also like to imagine that Jack Vance's fictional universe of the Oikumene and the Gaean Reach is based on actual events from the Asimov Reality. In that Reality, the Phari were allowed to help create telepathic humans, but the Phari were "out of reach", existing inside the Hierion Domain. Just as we humans have not ever been in contact with the Huaoshy, the Phari only indirectly influence human affairs.

Hai'zek
The Overlords in Clarke's story, "Childhood's End" strongly influenced me when I selected the type of aliens who visit Earth in the Ekcolir Reality.  Recently, I finally created a specific Fru'wu character (Hai'zek), but then I chickened out and ended up with the idea that Hai'zek was really a human "in disguise".

I recently created a new positronic robot character known as Danni or Dani. However, as a humanoid robot, this character is not really new. Dani is in some mysterious way related to Asimov's famous robot Daneel. A humanoid robot of alien design and manufacture would qualify for the 2020 change challenge, but I'm not sure if I really want to create a non-biological character. I've tried that before and ended up with Man Bin.

Collaborators
I have fun creating imaginary collaborators who can help the Editor. Is there an alien character who could collaborate in telling the Exode Saga?

Also, I like Asimov's idea of developing characters who the reader cannot easily categorize as good or evil. I'm imagining an alien humanoid (for now, call this new character "NAx") who becomes involved in the writing of the Secret History of Humanity, but the Editor is not certain that NAx can be trusted.

a Preland
The closest I've previously come to this is a character named Henrike. However, Henrike is a Preland and there is a complex relationship between the Prelands and we humans, so Henrike is not alien enough. 1 idea: there were some interesting alien characters such as a Guiphoa (Fint) who came to Earth with Grean. It might be time for another alien from a distant galaxy. 2: why not an alien who can represent the views of the pek?

Related Reading: Nirutam and her pet cat
         2019 Change Challenge
     2021 change challenge
Next: Two Wrongs (make a right)

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Nov 1, 2019

Bot Speed

Bot speed. This "bot" created by Daniel McKay (image source).
When I was composing a recent blog post, I received a warning message from our friends at Google saying that they had detected an unusually large amount of data requests from my IP address. I had to prove that I was not a bot before I could continue crafting my blog post.

My conclusion: after ten years of Blogger platform blogging, I can now write at "bot speed".

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I was vastly amused when I first read about the idea of writing at "pulp speed". I feel sorry for authors who have tried to support a family by writing stories for publication in pulp magazines. Being paid one cent per word, you had to write fast.

I blog to entertain myself, and so I get to write at my own speed, without trying to meet any deadlines. Of course, the only reason Google might question my internet data rate is because I like to illustrate my stories. My earlier blog post about the Phari Network has over 40 images on a single webpage, which I'm sure violates someone's rules for internet design. While there are only 5,000 words of text on that webpage, with the the images it all adds up to about 2.5 Mb of data, which does not seem like much by today's standards. However, because the Blogger service does not provide a WYSIWYG interface, I must repeatedly use the "preview" feature, reloading that 2.5 Mb from Google's servers again and again and again.

Illustrating Rylla
My largest concern while creating that blog post was an issue that has bothered me continually since about October 2018: should I make an image depicting Rylla?

Rylla is a character that I invented about a year ago. Under normal circumstances, nothing can prevent me from creating illustrations of my fictional characters such as Rylla. Most characters in my Sci Fi stories are either aliens or humans who are the products of genetic engineering and careful control of embryonic development or they might be endowed with the ability to shape (morph) their nanoscopic components into any desired physical form.

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An example that comes to mind is Dr. Zelter. I made use of some images of Olivia Wilde to depict Dr. Zelter. The Image shown to the left is another image from my fan fiction "Contact" television show which depicts Dr. Shella Wye, who I imagined to be an alien visitor to Earth who can disguise "herself" as human, but "she" is neither male or female.

So, why not find an image on the internet that I could use to depict Rylla? The problem is, Rylla is a minor and I'm pretending that she might not want to have her image spread across a bunch of webpages.

Ivory Fersoni
Artist's depiction of
the young Ivory Fersoni
I previously faced a similar problem with Ivory. That is a depiction of Ivory to the right on this page. She grew up to become a slim young woman with hardly any adipose tissue. Eventually she learned that she was not exactly human.

Ivory as I imagine her at Moon Base.
The image to the left is a depiction of Ivory's true facial features. With many Asterothrope gene combinations, her embryonic development had to be shaped and crafted by developmental control nanites, allowing her to pass as human.

Eventually, Ivory discovered the truth about her alien origins and she tried to reshape her body. With the help of facial nanites, Ivory often disguised herself as the actress Hilarie Burton.

Space Energy Missions
Often I depict characters such as Ivory on imaginary book and magazine covers. There is Ivory while using the physical form of Hilarie Burton. Also shown are some of the other folks at Space Energy Missions, including Luri and Betty.

Smade. A recent illustration that was particularly fun to make is shown below. This depicts Smade and two of his family members. Smade lives happily with his many wives and children on Smade's Planet, a world where he and his family are the only permanent human residents. Of course, various folks drop in to rest and drink.

In order to depict Úna, one of Smade's wives, I've made use of several images of the famous actress Courtney Cox.

Welcome to Smade's Tavern!  Mr. Smade with one of his wives (Úna Nybröm) and
one of Smade's children, ready with a cold brew for a guest who has just arrived on Smade's Planet.
Also available from the bar: Fraze and Hannah's Mascarene Rum from Copus. (image source)
Pallis Atwrode (source)
Here in October of 2019, I needed to illustrate several new story characters including Kate and Nova Prekus, Ryjyl Wishwell and Wendy Larsen. I had previously depicted Pallis Atwrode (see the image to the right) as described by Jack Vance in Star King, but I felt the need to find additional images for my stories of Wendy's adventures in the AR Simulator.

The "new" Pallis (source)
There is the "new" Pallis, shown in a fake magazine cover (image to the left on this page). I made use of the model Gigi Hadid for my new depictions of Pallis.

Rygyl Wishwell (source)
For depictions of Kate and Nova, I made use of images of two other lesser known models, Hedvig Palm and Georgia Hilmer. For my depictions of Inspector Rygyl Wishwell, I used images of Adrienne Koleszár. That is Rygyl in an Avente hospital on the planet Alphanor (image to the right).

As usual, if you object to my use of your image to illustrate my fictional characters, please let me know.
Just for Google: a blog post with 50 images.
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Google+   Gone, but not forgotten

I finally managed to remove the stupid google+ link from the top of this blog!

I had been experimenting and waiting to see how long it would take for the folks at Google to remove the offending link, but the answer to "How long?" was apparently: "after hell freezes over".

Remove the useless Google+ link from your blog's "theme" file (line 161 in the example shown above).
Be careful, don't remove the end of header tag (in line 662 in the example shown above).


Dec 2, 2015

Maximum Desired Response

Time Technician Andrew Harlan
I've previously blogged about Isaac Asimov's time travel novel, The End of Eternity. Here, I examine a few of the most intriguing elements that Asimov put into this science fiction story. I also comment on the kinds of problems that readers here in 2015 can face when reading and interpreting science fiction novels that were written 60 years ago.

I was amused to recently see The End of Eternity described as a "sci-fi romance" (here). And judged as a romance story ("it’s mostly just a boring romance"). Asimov had a huge ego and he liked to point out the fact that he was a prolific writer who wrote in many genres and published books across almost the the entire range of the Dewey Decimal System. However, if anything, Asimov was an anti-romance writer (sort of like anti-matter!).

Click image to enlarge.
After Asimov got married and he had discovered sex, he tried writing a romantic short story. He thought he might be able to take that route towards getting published in the higher-reputation "slick" magazines rather than just publishing his stories in the science fiction pulp magazines. However, he could not find a buyer for his romance story. This early rebuff (1945) did not prevent Asimov from continuing to include female characters and lovers and sex in some of his stories, but it would be absurd to describe Asimov as "a writer of romance stories". I've previously described The End of Eternity as an unconventional love story.

The Caves of Steel
Asimov grew up as a science nerd, a book worm who started writing and published science fiction before he knew anything about women or had even dated one. As a young science fiction fan, he wrote letters of protest to science fiction magazines if they allowed "girl stuff" to appear on their pages. Later, he married (twice), became a father and only half jokingly constructed a public image of himself as a dirty old man (see The Sensuous Dirty Old Man).

Asimov is typically described as a writer of science fiction, but for many years during the middle part of his writing career he wrote almost no fiction, instead writing other things including many books and articles that explained scientific and historical subjects to an audience of general readers. Asimov became very interested in mystery stories. Asimov is famous for writing some of his positronic robot stories in a format that involves a fairly conventional "police detective" who investigates crimes.

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People who regard The End of Eternity as one of Asimov's best novels are usually impressed by the twists and turns of the story. We can admire the way Asimov constructed The End of Eternity as a mystery and how the story unfolds and keeps us guessing and wondering until the very end how things will turn out. Until two pages from the end, readers don't know if Harlan is going to kill his lover or live with her happily ever after.

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And, I believe, most science fiction fans who read The End of Eternity are not really very interested in the "girl stuff" that Asimov wrote into his story. I suspect that most readers are much more interested in the geeky science fiction issues (time travel, space travel, human evolution and human extinction) that Asimov wove into The End of Eternity. Don't look for The End of Eternity in the romance section.

Asimov's Rules for Reviewers
Book Reviews
1) "Reviewers must read the book carefully, every word."
2) "Reviewers must read with attention so that they avoid errors and unreasonable criticisms."
3) "Reviewers must concentrate on the book and only on the book."
4) "Reviewers must have a wide knowledge of the field."
5) "Reviewers must be competent writers themselves."
6) "Reviewers must not turn reviews into a showcase for the reviewers and their own agendas."


These days, most so-called "reviews" on the internet are either not reviews or they are crappy reviews.

However, reader comments about books can provide interesting data about reader reactions to books.

"Books are like mirrors: if a fool looks in, you cannot expect a genius to look out." -J.K. Rowling

Data: views of the readers
at Goodreads






Look at the "reviews" of The End of Eternity on amazon.com and compare the five star reviews to the critical reviews.

Critical (two star) reviews:
Mr. Amazon Customer: "I still had a lot of trouble buying into the main character in this story. The problem I have with him and the story in general is that emotional situations seem to be taken to extremes going from dry clinical detachment to wildly-in-love, blackmailing, murderous, and suicidal without any sort of in-between."

Genella V. Bakas: "I could not care less about the characters: plain, weird and superficial."

Ms. Amazon Customer: "the writing and characters seem sophomoric"

3 of Asimov's characters
Peter Franek: "The characters are lifeless, except the main character Harlan who suffers all kinds of disorders, is hating everybody and women and sex in particular. His girlfriend, on the contrary, is a devoted beauty who came from a different world only out of love to Harlan (whom she never had met before), reminding me of 19th century romantic operas."

Morphie: "The plot is jumbled, the characters undeveloped, the premise is almost incoherent"

George halligan: "Poor plot, insubstantial characters and a lapse into the jargon that amateur sci-fi authors"

Helpful positive reviews:
David Rasquinha: "At the heart of the book is the love story of Andrew Harlan and Noyes Lambent, but this tale is just a framework for Asimov to build on. In the final analysis, Asimov is making the point that just as a child learns to walk by repeated falls, humanity's ultimate characteristic is the Schumpeterian desire and ability to innovate through risks. If we are protected from ever making mistakes, we may avoid tragedies, but the human race itself will vegetate and die. As with many of his earlier works, the dialog can be jarring and characters often one-dimensional. For all that however, The End of Eternity ranks among Asimov's finest"





What do I conclude from these data (above)? First, Asimov was writing way over the head of some 21st century readers. Some people just get confused by The End of Eternity and complain about a poor and jumbled plot. Other readers enjoy the story and describe it as "" and note: "". If your idea of science fiction comes from watching mindless Hollywood dreck, then you probably can't even understand the time-twisted plot that Asimov presents to you in The End of Eternity.

I like the order in which



Noÿs Lambent
Noÿs functions as an M.N.C. -a Minumum Necessary Change. In the technical jargon of Eternity, a M.N.C. is the desired means of changing the flow of Time and initiating a Reality Change. What change does Noÿs cause? Nothing less than the end of Eternity.

"Eternity was too finely balanced an arrangement to endure modification."

Eternity is the time travel "device" that Asimov imagined. Eternity is both a time travel machine and a place that exists outside of the normal flow of Time. Asimov tells the story from the perspective of Andrew Harlan, one of the Eternals, the residents of Eternity who work (using time travel) to guide humanity safely through the centuries.

Asimov wrote The End of Eternity in the 1950s, so he makes the explicit point that Eternity and time travel are used to prevent dangerous technologies (such as those for exploiting nuclear energy) from being developed and used on Earth. The result? Human society remains technologically constrained, changing little for the 10,000,000 years of human existence -before Humanity finally dies out, sadly, never having spread outward from Earth to other planets in the galaxy.

Harlan was born in the 95th century. We never learn many details about life in the 95th, but apparently Andrew grew up in a society where women were expected to be "true, pure-hearted mothers". For the sake of argument, let's imagine that the society of the 95th century is similar to that of the United States in say, 1895.

Thus, it is a challenge for Harlan to be an objective observer when he is made an Eternal and he must travel through time and Observe the 482nd century. The 482nd is at the extreme opposite end of many social axes compared to the conditions that Harlan grew up with in the 95th. In the 482nd ("more than a little matriarchical"), women are free to lead independent lives and have sexual partners just for pleasure. Children can be produced artificially when women hand their egg cells off to "the ovaria". "In a hundred ways Harlan though the society sick".

What about the meta-society that exists within Eternity itself? The Eternals can observe the ebb and flow of social extremes across millions of years of human history, but the social system within Eternity is highly constrained and rigid. The greatest constraint arises from the fact that for (unexplained) genetic reasons, it is almost impossible to remove women from the flow of Time and place them into Eternity as full-time working Eternals -doing so is too disruptive to the history of Earth. Thus, the Eternals are almost exclusively males. The shortage of females in Eternity makes for some unhappy Eternals, but these lonely men are supposed to be like monks and work hard and ignore the deficiencies and hardships of their own existence. The Eternals view themselves as the Guardians of Humanity!

Noÿs Lambent is the only female character in The End of Eternity. And this is not because Asimov is sexist and hates women. Here is a plot summary of The End of Eternity: A smart and daring woman infiltrates a male-dominated society, locates its weaknesses, trips-up the clueless and bumbling males and deftly causes that society to collapse. She survives that collapse and lives to lead Humanity on towards a future of infinite possibilities among the stars. In her spare time she woos and wins the love of her life.

With a powerful and competent woman like Noÿs on the job, Asimov had no need to insert any other female characters into the story.

"it’s another 'he barely met her, but now he desperately loves her' kind of book."

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Not too long ago there was an article in The Wall Street Journal about "love at first sight". Many human males experience the phenomenon of quickly falling in love with their mate. Asimov "fell in love at first sight" at the age of 22. Jack Vance was apparently working at a construction site, saw his future wife in an adjacent house and thought she looked great. He got a bag of doughnuts, went to her door and asked her to make a pot of coffee. They got married, had a family and lived together for the rest of their long lives. Apparently some people (about 50% of women) don't believe in "love at first sight". Some of them make it their business to patrol the science fiction genre and mock male authors who include "love at first sight" in their stories.

Spoilers Abound!
If you have never read The End of Eternity, this is a good time to do so. I'm going to assume that everyone reading past this point has read the story.

In The End of Eternity, Noÿs is a secret agent from the far future. She places herself in Harlan's life because she has a mission to accomplish, a mission that depends on Harlan falling in love with Noÿs. Before she ever meets Harlan, Noÿs has viewed the future and seen that if she plays her cards correctly, she and Harlan will end up living together happily in the future.

I understand that some people find this aspect of The End of Eternity to be objectionable. Fine. If it does not float your boat then move on. I recommend that you exit the science fiction section of the universe and head on over to the romance section where you can find thousands of novels that involve other kinds of love stories.

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Really, it is petty and absurd to complain about Asimov's decision to show Harlan as being unable to resist Noÿs. My interpretation of the story is that Noÿs had advanced technology from the far future that she could use to make sure that Harlan fell in love with her. Asimov was cagey about this, but I like to think that Noÿs had the power to shape her physical features so as to exactly match Harlan's preferences, she probably used pheromones and possibly drugs to influence his behavior and I think Asimov wrote his account of their first night together so as to suggest that Noÿs used some kind of telepathic contact to "put ideas into his head" and make sure that Harlan fell madly in love with her.

Given the background as described above, we should ask: what options were available to a woman such as Noÿs Lambent, what were the possible MNCs that she had available to her to select from, MNCs that would allow her to accomplish her mission to destroy Eternity?

But first, why bother putting an end to Eternity? The idea is, that by destroying Eternity, Earthlings will not put effort into developing time travel -instead they will develop nuclear energy and space travel and spread to the stars, creating an infinite future for Humanity. Ta Da! Noÿs is from the far future, from within the "Hidden Centuries", a part of human history that has been cut off from Eternity. Noÿs and her people can View possible alternative Realities, so they know that Eternity must be destroyed if Humanity is to survive. Noÿs, as the secret agent from the Hidden Centuries, must travel back in Time and destroy Eternity.

Having Viewed her own future, Noÿs knows that the M.N.C. that will cause the destruction of Eternity involves Andrew Harlan. He has the ability to destroy Eternity. Somehow Noÿs must convert Harlan from a loyal Eternal into a man who is willing to destroy Eternity. She must shift Harlan away from his devotion to Eternity by making him fall in love with her. She has seen the future and she knows that she can use Harlan's emotions to "get the better of him". Having seen the future, she knows that Harlan can not only fall in love with her, but act in a desperate fashion to protect her and even reach the point where he is willing to help her destroy Eternity so that they can live happily together and save Humanity.

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In addition to destroying Eternity and putting an end to time travel, Noÿs must accomplish one more task. She must go back into ancient history and give the secret of nuclear physics to Earthlings in the early 20th century (without her intervention, nuclear energy is not discovered until several centuries later).

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Thus, Noÿs knows that if her mission is a success, she will destroy Eternity, obliterate her own society in the Hidden Centuries, and end up trapped in the primitive 20th century.

Knowing all this, she selects a specific M.N.C. that will allow her to live out the remainder of her life happily in the 20th century. Specifically, she arranges things so that she and Harlan will fall in love and they will be together in a shared future. All the other MNCs available to Noÿs do not have such a happy ending for her.

This is a very romantic notion. While busily destroying the world as she knows it and risking nuclear war on Earth in the 20th century, Noÿs engineers a new Reality in which her love affair with Harlan will come to be.

So how does Noÿs destroy Eternity and make Harlan fall in love with her? She travels back in time to the 482nd century and poses as a (very sexy) woman of that time. Why the 482nd? And from among all Eternals, why use Harlan (specifically) as the tool to destroy Eternity?

Time Loop
One of the intriguing features that Asimov wrote into The End of Eternity is a time loop. We must imagine that originally time travel was discovered at some point in Earth's history, say in the year X. Then, someone from the future arranged to send back into time the required information to allow time travel technology to be developed several centuries earlier than the year X.

We are never told exactly how or why that was done. By the time Harlan gets caught up in the web that Noÿs is weaving, he is already an integral part of the time loop that created Eternity. Harlan's critical role is that he is an expert on primitive Earth history, which is critical for the existence of Eternity because he can train the secret agent (Brinsley Sheridan Cooper) who will be sent back in time to the primitive period of Earth's history (before Eternity exists) in order to invent time travel and allow Eternity to come into existence. Thus, the existence of Eternity depends in a time-loopy way on the existence of Eternity.

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So, we must conclude that if Noÿs never came into Harlan's life, he would have remained a loyal Eternal and he would have played out his role in helping Eternity come into existence. In that Reality, Harlan would have gone to the 482nd century and made Observations to confirm that women of that century had developed a dangerous belief: the belief that having sex with an Eternal could give them immortality. That unusual belief would have been corrected (perhaps by Harlan himself imposing a M.N.C. to eliminate that belief) and nothing else of much interest would have happened...Eternity would have continued to exist.

Instead, with Noÿs disguised and playing the role of a woman from the 482nd, Harlan is sent careening down a new trajectory of life. Asimov has considerable fun showing how the uptight and sexually repressed Harlan flips his lid when he encounters Noÿs.

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Telepathy?
Noÿs is from millions of years in our future. What advanced technologies and powers might be at her disposal? It might be that Noÿs has been specifically selected by the people of the Hidden Centuries to be perfect bait for Harlan. It also might be that Noÿs drugs Harlan and/or uses telepathy to control his behavior and thought patterns.

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Noÿs certainly has the power to put ideas into Harlan's head. Harlan starts having dreams in which Noÿs is naked and he is (initially) ashamed. Later, when he is completely smitten, he becomes incapable of feeling shame for anything he does with Noÿs. Harlan is completely transformed... he changes from a loyal Eternal who never thinks about having a relationship with a woman to a man who will do anything -even destroy Eternity- to preserve his relationship with Noÿs.

"Throughout the novel, Harlan’s notions toward Noÿs are alarmingly sexist."

Use of the term "sexism" (from the Ngram Viewer).

Did Asimov depict Harlan as being "sexist"? Asimov did depict Harlan as being from a society where women have a defined role in society as mothers. Asimov did depict Harlan as being repulsed by the society of the 482nd. Asimov did depict Harlan as objecting to the way that Computer Finge had brought the distracting and provocative Noÿs into Eternity. And Asimov depicted Harlan as being a creature of his homewhen and training as an Eternal and being unable resit being emotionally manipulated by both Finge and Noÿs. At no point in The End of Eternity does anyone mention the idea that men are naturally superior to women or that women should be discriminated against.

Harlan is a 32-year-old virgin. Readers should think of him as being like a monk who has taken a vow of celibacy. Still, he does like women. He does not want to be distracted by women. When Noÿs starts "coming on" to him, Harlan has no idea what to do and how to defend his ideals. While playing the role of a rich and pampered woman from the 482nd, she is acting out the behavior of someone who lives only for fun, leisure and pleasure. When Harlan gets mad at Noÿs (actually, he's mad at himself for being so fully distracted by her beauty and charms) he lashes out and tries to dismiss her as a "stupid girl". Even though he tries to dismiss Noÿs as a "stupid girl" in his thoughts, does Harlan really think she is stupid? Nobody is buying it, not even Harlan. He's desperately trying to not let himself like Noÿs, desperately trying to push her away so that he's not further distracted by her, desperately trying to do his work so that he won't be tricked into doing what he thinks Computer Finge wants him to do.

Is Harlan alarmingly sexist? "He criticizes her scanty, but time-relevant clothing". Harlan points out the fact that when women are brought into Eternity (often to provide sexual partners for Eternals), it is done discretely. When Harlan arrives in the section of Eternity for the 482nd (for what he thinks is a standard Observation mission) he can't imagine why Finge is parading a sexually provocative woman in front of him. Following his training and the rules and conventions of Eternity, Harlan get angry and assumes that Finge is flaunting his authority as a Computer to bend the rules of Eternity. Harlan does not actually criticize the clothing that Noÿs wears, he objects to Finge allowing Noÿs to parade around wearing sexually provocative clothing in front of men who are trying to remain celibate and not be distracted by women.

"I brought you another drink."
Does Harlan criticize the "possibly numerous sexual liaisons" of Noÿs? Given his upbringing in the 95th, Harlan certainly is uncomfortable with a society in which women are free to have many casual sexual partners just for pleasure while leaving childbirth to automated ovaria. Harlan probably dislikes even thinking about a society where women will usually "say yes" if a man casually asks for sex. Harlan does not want that kind of distraction on his mind. Knowing himself, he probably knows all too well how easy it would be to give into temptation in such an environment. To protect himself and defend his commitment to being celibate, he tells himself that the society of the 482nd is sick. Does this make Harlan alarmingly sexist?

Temptation
In The End of Eternity Asimov has carefully depicted Harlan as a creature of the 95th century, indoctrinated into the lifestyle of an Eternal. Asimov carefully depicts Noÿs as playing the role of a woman from the 482nd. Harlan behaves exactly as we expect him to behave when he is placed into contact with the 482nd. In what sense is his behavior "alarming"? Asimov carefully constructed Harlan to illustrate a guy who could be easily unhinged by the sexually-charged predicament that Finge and Noÿs place him in.

Harlan's sexism is apparently alarming for some people who feel threatened by the idea of a fictional character who grew up in a fictional culture where women are "true, pure-hearted mothers". Harlan's sexism is apparently alarming for some people who feel threatened by the idea of a fictional man who is trying to remain celibate and who is trying to not be distracted by a beautiful woman who is trying to have sex with him. Harlan's sexism is apparently alarming for some people who are going out of their way to raise the call of: "Alarm! Sexism!".

"it’s easy to dump this book for its dull, old-fashioned tone and predictable sexist relationship patterns."

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If it is easy for some readers of The End of Eternity, here in the year 2015, to feel this way, then that is more of an indictment of the dumper than the dumpee. Asimov was a great admirer of women. He praised professional women (and married one) and publicly promoted and supported the careers of women in the publishing industry. Harlan was specifically designed as a character who would predictably and reliably act out "sexist relationship patterns". Of course, in 1955 the term "sexist relationship pattern" did not yet exist, nor did the connotations of condemnation that now accompany such language.

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In 2015, I suppose Harlan meets most people's definition of being "sexist". Is there some rule that says that when readers find a science fiction book with a sexist character then the reader's response should be to "throw it across the room and then walk over to it and stomp on it and spit on it and then contact the local waste disposal authorities for a special pick up because you’re not touching that thing again"?

I suppose there are some people who feel that way about meat eating. There are probably some vegetarians who don't want to touch a book that includes a character who enjoys eating meat.

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It is clear that here in 2015 there is a cadre of people who feel obliged to patrol the science fiction literature and "call out" old white guys who included "sexist" characters in their stories. Fine, if it is your mission in life to be offended by Harlan's "sexism" then indulge yourself. Let yourself be distracted from enjoying one of the great stories of the science fiction genre. Revel in your obsession. My advice is, if you love science fiction, then keep an open mind and observe what Asimov was trying to do in The End of Eternity. He certainly was not endorsing sexism.

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The free thinkers who created science fiction as a new literary genre had their own sexual revolution long before the 1960s. Yes, all of Western Civilization was male-dominated when the science fiction genre came into existence, so there is plenty of cringe-worthy stuff in the archives of science fiction. However, nobody in 2015 should be unable to understand what Asimov was doing when he wrote The End of Eternity. If you don't like talky and thoughtful science fiction then don't even try to read The End of Eternity. If you like to think and play the science fiction "what if?" game, then The End of Eternity is as much a treat for readers today as it was 60 years ago.

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Sex Change
Will The End of Eternity ever come to the big screen?
What if Asimov had reversed the sex of every character in The End of Eternity? Would that have made any difference to the story he told?

"it’s jarring to see such an old-fashioned depiction of a female character in EoE"

I think Asimov's depiction of Noÿs is almost as fresh today as it was 60 years ago. The main change for readers in 2015 is that there is a tribe of women today who were trained ("sexism" became a popular term the 1960s and peaked about 1995) to have a knee-jerk emotional reaction to male sexism, even if they are reading entertainment literature with a carefully constructed depiction of imaginary sexism being acted out by a character in science fiction story. These indoctrinated anti-sexists are at risk of self-censoring and not reading some of the great literature from the 20th century just because certain books include a "sexist" character. Thus, here in our "modern" age, we now (60 years after The End of Eternity was first published) have blog posts warning readers not to let their knee-jerk reactions keep them from reading Asimov's novel. I imagine poor Asimov turning in his grave and shaking his head.

"...the 21st century will be a kind of women's lib world. And as a matter of fact, it will be a kind of people's lib world because, you know, sexism works bad both ways." -Isaac Asimov, 1974

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Asimov was a student of history and a deep thinker. He could imagine the impact of technologies on human societies. In The End of Eternity Asimov played the science fiction game of creating a thought experiment, a playground for readers. He invited readers: imagine Eternity... a device that can allow us to see the extremes of social conventions from across 7,000,000 years of history. Imagine the people of the 95th century and those of the 482nd, at the two extremes with respect to the roles of women in human society. That is the science fiction game. It is sad that there are people in 2015 who can't stand to read a book in which Asimov depicts people acting out the conventions of the imaginary cultures of 95th and 482nd centuries and the imaginary society of Eternity. I'm saddened that there are people who don't understand why Asimov wrote Harlan as a "sexist" character and who don't understand the point of The End of Eternity.

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One of the points Asimov made in The End of Eternity is that humans can be caught up in their own narrow view of reality. When we allow ourselves to be that way, we are at risk of being duped, tricked, manipulated, blind-sided and ultimately, becoming extinct. It is ironic that we now have a cadre of narrow-minded people who (because of their narrow-minded views) can't even stand to read Asimov's book and listen to his warning about the dangers of being narrow-minded.

Jack Vance, another wise observer of human culture and societies, noted that extreme social structures seem to paradoxically provoke the creation of new cultural trends that can swing a society over towards the opposite extreme. In the Cadwal Chronicles, Vance depicted a tribe of radical feminists who tried to artificially construct a human society where men and women were indistinguishable, but the resulting society was not viable. In his Demon Princes saga, he depicted a future society of vegetarians that devolved into four footed grazers.

"Extremes are never healthy" -Andrew Harlan
The 482nd century: male supremacy is eliminated!

But, of course, Harlan himself was born into a society at one extreme of the social spectrum that Asimov chose to explore in The End of Eternity. Harlan is easy to manipulate because of his biases: he is the perfect target for a MNC.

Yes, there was a time when some men thought that no woman should be a doctor. Asimov was not such a man. He married a doctor.   Yes, even today some people struggle to have the freedom to live their life as they choose, sometimes having to struggle against gender stereotypes. These on-going struggles to deal with the consequences of sexism do not mean that it makes sense to avoid reading The End of Eternity.

"Asimov was being a snarky bastard with this silly time travel novel"
That's not right. Its not even wrong. The Eternals had unwittingly made it impossible for Humanity to develop interstellar space travel technology. Asimov depicted the total cluelessness of the Eternals with respect to what they had done and the devastating implications for Humanity. The Eternals had remorse and guilt every time they helped quash the human impulse to expand and explore, always doing so in the name of safety and their misguided attempts to help Humanity. With their advanced Reality Viewing technology, the people of the Hidden Centuries could figure out that Eternity was what caused the extinction of the human species and they took action to end Eternity.

Is The End of Eternity silly? In some sense, all time travel stories are silly. However, in my view, The End of Eternity is one of the least silly time travel stories. I think Asimov probably did have fun creating his story and I have fun every time I read it. Some of the elements of the story like the smoking and griping Eternals and Harlan's "sexism" and the sexiness of Noÿs were lovingly exaggerated to comic levels by Asimov. Still, I'd call the novel fun and entertaining, not silly. I don't detect a tone of snarkiness coming from Asimov.

Bad Reviews
Asimov had much to say about people who review stories. One bit of advice that Asimov gave to reviewers was that they should not make a review be about themselves. This is the reason why I seldom write reviews. When I want to write about a novel such as The End of Eternity, I almost always want to explore my personal reactions to the story and, often, how I'd like to see the story be modified or extended. I have no interest in writing a review. Sadly, the internet is full of commentary and blog posts that are called "reviews", but the author has either not written a review or has written a crappy review.

Maximum Desired Response?
One way that you can create a crappy review is to not understand a book and not understand what the author was trying to accomplish. Another way to create a crappy review is to not understand and respect the intended audience of a book.

I'm fascinated by reader's reactions to science fiction stories from the previous millennium. In 2015, many readers who stumble upon books such as The End of Eternity have no idea what they have gotten themselves into. In 1955, the people who read The End of Eternity would have almost all been willing to play Asimov's imaginative and entertaining "what if?" game and get to know Harlan and Noÿs. Nobody had to be told to keep reading the book to the end and nobody had to be told not to throw the book away after reading 30 pages because of Harlan's sexism. In the 1950s, nobody reviewed The End of Eternity and dismissed it as "another sci-fi romance" or a "boring romance with some pseudo-jargon". Is creating a generation of pseudo-science fiction fans who can't read the science fiction literature really the Maximum Desired Response of feminism?

The social pendulum continues to swing.

Observing 2015
If Asimov had access to time travel in 1955 and if he had known about the sexual revolution of the 1960s, would he have changed The End of Eternity? If Asimov were alive now, would he have any regrets over the content of The End of Eternity? I suspect not. I also suspect that The End of Eternity will stand the test of time and come to be even more widely recognized as one of the great science fiction stories of the 20th century.

There are hundreds of "reviews" of The End of Eternity on the internet and many "reviewers" who just don't understand the book. For example:

"women generally do no have the aptitudes deemed crucial to deal with the psychological rigors of time travel"

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That is NOT in the book. It is sad that so many readers of science fiction here in this century 'do no have' the ability to keep up with Asimov and understand what's going on in The End of Eternity.

One more example:

"not one of these centuries develops a society that produces enough technically and scientifically-minded women to become Eternals"

That is NOT in the book. From the same "review": "a science fiction author who literally can't imagine women as anything other than conniving seductresses who will destroy everything if allowed into the treehouse". Now I can detect the snarkiness -and it does not come from Asimov. This comment about Asimov is demonstrably false, but, of course, truth is not important when a sexist old guy is being denounced.

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My advice is that you not trust book "reviewers" to understand The End of Eternity. In the interwebs of 2015, do not trust book "reviewers" to tell the truth. If you are a thoughtful person who enjoys science fiction then you should read Asimov's stories yourself. Oh, and try to keep up.

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