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| Tyhry and Marda on Threy. |
Later, F. Marda sacrifices herself. The dead body of F. Marda is found on Threy. Readers quickly learn that the dead body is that of a replicoid copy of the biological Marda. However, Tyhry believes that her friend Marda has died. Having collaboratively created a 7,500 word version of "The Femtobot Smuggler" in collaboration with Claude, I next had Claude read the story without being provided with any additional background information about the Exodemic Fictional Universe. As described below, I began to question Claude about the completed story. I wondered if Claude could explain why there was the death of a character in "The Femtobot Smuggler".
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| The completed story in a text file for Claude. |
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February 15th, 2040.
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| On the planet Threy in Alastor Cluster. |
Next, Marda's mother, Rylla Onway, popped through the entry gate and arrived on Threy. Rylla, a tall and athletic woman who had been a long distance runner for decades, took a deep breath of the Threy air, fragrant with the resins of alien trees that looked like Earthly hemlock. She reached her arms out to bask in the warm rays of Threy's sun.
Lastly, Zeta Gohrlay and her husband Eddy arrived. Eddy, the father of Tyhry, told her, "I can see why you wanted to visit this world and stay at this resort. This region of the planet reminds me of Kings Canyon." It was mid-afternoon and light from the brilliant white star of Threy reflected off the glittering snow-capped peaks that rose from a sea of green hills in the distance.
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| Relaxing at the resort on Threy. |
There was much discussion of random topics and consumption of many beverages made for them by the robotic staff of the resort and served in the form of colorful frozen concoctions in tall, thin glasses. Their talk meandered through the many past experiences that Rylla and Eddy had shared while investigating the planets of Alastor Cluster. For some mysterious reason, Alastor Cluster had only existed in the Asimov Reality, one of the many past historical timelines of Earth, but it was of great interest because of rumors that it was in Alastor Cluster that human telepaths had been developed by guided evolution in the far future of the Asimov Reality. Sadly, The Realty Simulation system had a temporal block that prevented Eddy and Rylla from going more than 1,500 years into the future of the Asimov Reality. Tyhry was bored by the mystery of the temporal block and her father's obsession with it. The conversation kept returning to the question of what they should do the next day and what popular tourist sites were to be found on Threy.
Finally, Rylla finished her laps and joined the others sitting by the pool. Taking note that Marda and Tyhry seemed unusually quiet and maybe even nervous, Rylla said to them, “I still don't understand why you selected Threy from among the 30,000 inhabited planets of the cluster.”
Marda told her mother, “I'm tempted to tell you Tyhry's reason, but she made me promise to keep it a secret.”
Everyone looked at Tyhry who squirmed under their gaze. Finally she told Zeta, “I do want to surprise you with a gift, but I'll say this... it is the next step up from those medical nanites that Manny gave you.”
Zeta giggled. She was quite pleased by the age-reversing effects of the medical nanites that now swarmed through the tissues of her body. Zeta was approaching 85, but she looked like a vigorous middle-aged woman. Zeta told Rylla, “You just spend too much time in the sun.”
In the end, the older visitors from Earth deferred to Tyhry and Marda since this family vacation was meant to celebrate their recent graduation from college. Tyhry finally suggested that they all go hiking in the mountains and start before sunup the next day so that they would have time to reach the top of Mt. Glisten. No better idea was offered and Marda gave a secret wink to Tyhry. So far, their plan was unfolding as expected.
As mind clones, Tyhry and Marda shared a telepathic connection. Marda telepathically told Tyhry: No sign of Manny.
Tyhry reflected on the happy fact that someone had obtained some of the super-strong nanite-based material that made possible the space elevators of planet Numenes, the capital world of Alastor Cluster. They had sent samples of that material to 250 research labs on Earth. For the past two months, Manny had been busy trying to round up all of those alien nanite samples. Manny took seriously the task of controlling the availability of nanotechnology on Earth. Tyhry had seen very little of Manny during those past two months. Tyhry telepathically told Marda: All we need is one more day without Manny.
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As the sun of Threy sank behind a nearby mountain, one of the robotic resort staff members suggested that the vacationers move indoors for dinner. They were led to a private dinning room and given comfortable robes to wear over their swimsuits. Settling in around the table, they first placed their food orders, then for a time, they discussed the specific trails they would follow both to and from Mt. Glisten, making use of holographic maps.
Marda and Tyhry exchanged knowing glances, silently communicating about their covert plans.
Zeta was aware of the fact that her husband had recently used the Reality Simulation System to make a quick visit to Threy. Now Zeta sensed a tension between Eddy and Tyhry, but she could not understand the reasons behind it. “Robots are so convenient to have around... I've never understood why so few planets of the Asimov Reality made use of them.
Tyhry said, “Mother, you should read Rylla's story, “The Yerophet Experiment”. It explains the fact that most people living in the Asimov Reality had their scientific creativity suppressed, which resulted in technological stagnation.”
Eddy said, “The best hypothesis is that the planet Triskelion was made an exception to the rule of stagnation simply to provide a source of sedrons for space travel. Once the door was opened to sedron mining technology, the genie was out of the bottle.”
Rylla had noticed that Tyhry and Marda were behaving oddly. She said, “Since Threy has an unusual number of robots, then that could explain why Tyhry selected this world for a vacation. Tyhry is attracted to advanced technology like a rat is attracted to cheese.”
Marda giggled and said, “Mother, I hope you are not calling Tyhry a rat!”
Tyhry shrugged and admitted. “Of course I selected Threy because of the high level of technology here. If you must know and spoil mom's surprise, I'll tell you... I hope to get my hands on some Yastyn hair nanites. Why should Manny be the only one with outrageously beautiful hair?”
Tyhry, having hardly eaten anything, got out of her chair and kissed her father's cheek. “I'll certainly try to stay out of trouble. I'm tired. I'm off to bed. See you all early in the morning for the hike into the mountains.”
Zeta ran a hand through her graying hair. “I would not mind having lovely hair like Manny's. If Tyhry gets her hands on alien hair nanites, Manny is sure to crash this party.”
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Tyhry could barely sleep that night, her thoughts buzzing with anticipation over her plan to obtain alien hair nanites. She kept reviewing in her mind her previous visits to Threy, carried out in violation of her father's desire that she not visit Alastor Cluster without the company of either he or Rylla. Now, hopefully Kasty had finally gotten permission from the Phari to share programmable femtobots with Tyhry.
The next morning, two hours before dawn, she slipped out of the resort bungalow she shared with Marda and carefully made her way past Rylla's room. Marda was sleeping soundly, having danced with Rylla and other resort guests late into the night. This day would be risky, with one of her replicoid copies arriving on Threy and going on the hike to Mt. Glisten, but the thrill of sneaking behind Manny's back to obtain forbidden nanites was invigorating. Tyhry was glad that Anthony would be going along on the hike. She did not like to be without his comforting presence.
Stepping outside into the cool crisp air, Tyhry tapped the communicator that was hidden under the skin of her wrist. "Kasty? I'm heading out now to meet you."
The alien's voice crackled through the radio connection. "I'll be waiting at the arranged coordinates in the mountains. Has anyone noticed you up and about at this hour?"
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| Kasty the Yastyn. |
Tyhry climbed into one of the small automated vehicles resting near the front of the resort. Tyhry entered the destination coordinates into the autopilot. As the transport pod hummed to life and began navigating along a wooded path towards the mountains, Tyhry peered out the window watching for signs of movement. Tyhry hoped that her meeting with Kasty might be completed without Manny noticing.
The pod finally came to rest near a gurgling stream. Tyhry stepped out into a secluded meadow filled with lush purplish grass and alien wildflowers under the violet dawn sky. In the distance stood Kasty next to a sleek aircar, her lanky Yastyn form unmistakable even in the dim light. Tyhry was giddy with anticipation; it was time to obtain her prize.
Tyhry eagerly approached Kasty where the alien stood waiting near a stand of towering trees, her form silhouetted in early dawn light. Tyhry increased her pace, her boot-steps nearly soundless on the spongy moss. This had to work. There would be no going back once Manny discovered another forbidden nanotech loose on Earth. But the rewards would be worth it.
Kasty shifted as Tyhry approached, her large oval eyes glinting. "I must admit, even I did not anticipate you making it this far without being noticed by someone," She glanced over her shoulder and then continued. "You continue to demonstrate unusual determination for one so young."
Tyhry tilted her chin defiantly. "I'm old enough to change the world... Earth, whether you think I'm ready or not."
Kasty stared at Tyhry for a moment, then chuckled softly. "Indeed. Well then, you will be pleased to hear that the Phari have given me permission to share my femtobots with you. They were impressed by the fact that you have been trained to program nanites by Manny. The Phari called her a bumpha. Manny the bumpha. Do you know what that means?”
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| A Yastyn aircar. |
Kasty asked, “If you mentor has such advanced nanites then why don't you simply get hair nanites from Manny?”
Tyhry shrugged. “She does not trust me. Manny only lets me play with toy nanites, like the clothing nanites I told you about.” A smile came to her lips as Tyhry thought about the anti-gravity bra she had made for Zeta using the clothing nanites provided by Manny.
Kasty said, “Shall we complete our business?"
Tyhry nodded. This was it. Kasty led Tyhry onto her slender aircar and withdrew a tiny silver case containing advanced programmable femtobots, waiting dormant to be awoken.
Tyhry's breath caught. Soon her parents would have eons more time together. And nothing would stop the advance of human progress ever again.
She took the nanite case from Kasty, vision blurring with possibilities. A great new technological frontier awaited back on Earth, and Tyhry would deliver the alien nanites that would liberate Humanity from the curse of mortality.
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Back at the resort, Eddy and Zeta had awoken early and gone down to the dining area where they found Tyhry already eating breakfast.
"You're up early," Eddy said, taking a seat across from his daughter. "Couldn't sleep?"
The replicoid copy gave a nonchalant shrug. "I was very excited... about today's hike. Oh, I hope you don't mind but I brought Anthony into the simulation to join us."
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| Anthony, Marda and Tyhry. |
Zeta said, “I suppose Marda and Rylla will be the last to rise. They were tearing up the dance floor when I went to bed last night.”
Before long Manny arrived as well, looking anxious. She shook her head at Tyhry, "Honestly, can't you go even one day without Anthony at your side?"
Tyhry giggled and said, “He's good company.”
Manny scrutinized the scene, instantly detecting with her advanced zeptite-enabled senses that this was not the original Tyhry, but rather a replicoid copy of the girl. Manny was well aware that Tyhry had discovered how to make replicoid copies of people using the Reality Simulation System's pattern buffer. However she stayed silent, realizing that Tyhry would try to smuggle forbidden femtobots off of Threy. Manny would not allow that, but she knew better than to make a scene quite yet. There was still a chance to discretely intervene and Manny would not have to embarrass Tyhry's parents by scolding Tyhry for her bad behavior.
"Well, the more the merrier," Zeta said pleasantly. "Shall we get ready to head out soon? I want to get a good start on those mountain trails."
The replicoid copy of Tyhry was not happy to see Manny. Fearing Manny's wrath, the Tyhry copy was tempted to give up on the Threy mission and return to Earth. As a replicoid made by the Reality Simulation System, this Tyhry copy was as mortal as any human, even though made of femtobot components.
Along with Rylla and Eddy, only Tyhry and Tyhry's copies had the special nanite key that provided the ability to pop themselves out of the Reality Simulation System at anytime. Taking a deep breath, the replicoid copy of Tyhry decided to continue with her assigned task. She resisted the temptation to telepathically link to the original Tyhry.
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Kasty opened a tiny vial, releasing some of his advanced femtobots into the air. The microscopic nanomachines immediately flew to Tyhry, integrating themselves into her blonde tresses. Before long her hair was structurally modified and now it flowed down past her hips, transformed into elegant silver waves that shone beautifully.
"It's perfect!" Tyhry gazed at her reflection and marveled at how her nanite-transformed hair sparkled with dancing highlights, just like Manny's gorgeous hair. "It's just as I saw in my vision," Tyhry proclaimed. "I knew this day would come, when I'd be gifted these femtobots for the betterment of humanity."
Kasty raised an eyebrow. Kasty had a weak telepathic link to Tyhry's mind. "You have an interesting way of peering through time and perceiving possibilities. My people long ago learned how to use femtobots to reliably send information into the Sedron Time Stream and then later retrieve that stored information."
Tyhry said, "Some other day, when I have more time, you will have to tell me what you know about the Sedron Domain."
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| Hair nanites at work. |
Tyhry bowed to Kasty, exited from the aircar and then returned to her transport pod.
Back in her room at the resort, Tyhry was programming some of the hair nanites in preparation for using them to modify Zeta's hair when Manny stormed in angrily. "Do you take me for a fool?" she demanded. "I know exactly why you came to this planet, and I cannot allow you to take such dangerous technology back to Earth."
Tyhry froze, her heart sinking as she realized her plan was unraveling. She told Manny, “I know what I'm doing. I'm not going to cause any damage with these new nanites.” At the same time, Tyhry left her mind open to Marda and her replicoid copy, allowing the other girls to become aware that Manny was on Threy.
Manny shook her head. “You can't control these alien nanites. If they fell into the wrong hands... and once on Earth, they would... the consequences would be catastrophic.”
Tyhry laughed nervously. “You don't know that. We humans might not be as clever as you, Manny, but we are not fools. Please stop treating us like primitives.”
But before another word could be said, Manny suddenly halted, distracted by her telepathic monitoring of Marda who was on the steep slopes of Mt. Glisten. Marda had taken a bad fall and broken her arm during the hike.
"Don't try to take Kasty's nanites back to Earth," Manny warned. "You wont be able to get them out of this Simulation. I put a blocking filter on the Reality Simulation System.” Then Manny disappeared from the room and went to Mt. Glisten to help with Marda.
Alone again, Tyhry frantically got back to work. If she was quick enough, her scheme could still succeed. Going beyond the cover story, the goal of merely ornamental hair improvements, she reprogrammed the advanced femtobots to infiltrate and scan cells down to the molecular level.
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The group returned to the resort after their long hike, tired but exhilarated by the spectacular views from the summit of Mt. Glisten. Marda winced slightly as she gingerly held her arm ensconced in a protective cast that Anthony had generated by using his nanites. Marda was also feeling the effects of a mild concussion, the result of her fall during the descent.
As the hikers from Earth settled into their private dining room, Manny was still making it her business to scold Marda. "Maybe next time you'll be more careful... you should think about future consequences instead of fooling around and being reckless on dangerous terrain." While speaking, Manny looked at Tyhry since Manny's words were also meant for her.
Marda bit her lip, realizing her injury had been a distraction for Manny, but at what cost? Her eyes flashed with irritation when Manny declared she would let the break heal naturally rather than use advanced bumpha medical nanites to speed the healing process.
Just then, Zeta shrieked in excitement as Tyhry presented her with a vial of sparkling silver fluid. Tyhry told her mother, "These nanites are for you. During the hike, I was deploying the special nanite scan-and-capture femtobots that I crafted. I captured some stray Yastyn hair nanites! Here mother, let me put them in your hair."
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| Marda's broken arm. |
"Oh my, suddenly your hair looks lovely... just like Manny's!" Rylla said in admiration.
Zeta asked one of the resort's servant robots to bring a holography mirror and then she examined her new hair from every angle. Zeta was amazed how youthful she now appeared. However, Zeta felt she looked a bit silly because she had gotten a sunburn during the hike and her cheeks and nose were bright red.
While Zeta studied her hair, Manny was telepathically looking through Tyhry's thoughts. Manny frowned, thinking about Tyhry's true intentions for making immortal replicoid copies of her parents. "I'm afraid these alien hair nanites cannot leave this planet," she declared. Manny looked into Tyhry's eyes and said, "Any data you try to transmit or smuggle back to Earth will be blocked... by me."
Tyhry asked defiantly, “Any data?”
Manny nodded. “I have complete control over the Sedron Domain. Tyhry, if you try to send data back to Earth by way of the Sedron Time Stream, know that all such data will be scrambled by me. You will never be able to recover the data in usable form at a later time.”
Tyhry knew she was defeated, but she could not resist saying, “Can you be so sure? What if I have already received the information in the past?”
Tyhry turned pleading eyes to her father. "Dad, the potential of this alien femtobot technology is astounding. Just give me a chance to show what good I can do!"
But Eddy shook his head and told his daughter, "Manny knows best, dear. You should not meddle with things beyond our understanding. You've read the results of my investigations into the history of the universe. Too many planetary civilizations have been destroyed by gray goo catastrophes. We can't risk Earthly civilization being damaged by advanced programmable femtobots."
Tyhry crossed her arms, a stormy expression on her face. Then Zeta remarked, "Forgive me dear, but how did you avoid getting too much sun during our hike today? Your skin looks untouched!"
Thinking quickly, Tyhry replied, "Oh, I had my clothing nanites generate a thin UV-blocking layer over my skin. New program I've been testing out." She hoped the little white lie would satisfy the curiosity of Zeta, Eddy and Rylla who all had sunburns.
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Six months earlier.
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| Tyhry |
Tyhry's fingers danced across the console and she initiated access codes that would allow her entry into a new instance of the Ekcolir Reality Simulation. She turned and walked through the newly created entry portal and instantly arrived inside a new fork of the Simulation. She returned to the control console and ran a duplication subroutine, making a new femtobot copy of herself. When the duplication process completed, the replicoid version seemed to appear out of thin air beside the original copy of Tyhry.
For a few seconds, the two copies of Tyhry experienced the strange sensation of being in telepathic contact with an exact copy of her mind. Then Tyhry gathered her wits and said, “Let's make this quick.” She told the femtobot copy, “I'll refer to you as F. Tyhry.”
F. Tyhry flexed her fingers. “I feel perfectly normal, although I realize that I am now composed of nanoscopically small femtobot components.”
"Perfect," Tyhry murmured. She addressed the copy, "I have a special assignment for you."
F. Tyhry nodded. "I understand. As your replicoid copy, I must avoid contact with Manny while I try to obtain advanced programmable femtobots."
Tyhry mused, "Manny will not allow advanced alien nanotechnology on Earth. But we need femtobots that are far more sophisticated than the simple clothing nanites that I've been allowed to access. I want you to secretly obtain programmable femtobots from the planet Threy."
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| F. Tyhry |
Tyhry tapped the console display, bringing up data on the advanced alien civilizations of Alastor Cluster. "The Phari are rumored to be the gatekeepers of femtobot knowledge among the worlds of Alastor Cluster. If anyone can help you, it will be them. Try to telepathically contact the Phari and convince them that it is safe for you to deploy alien femtobots on Earth."
F. Tyhry straightened with purpose. "I understand the importance of this mission. The potential is astonishing - with such nanites, we can free humanity from the curse of mortality."
Tyhry placed a hand on her duplicate's shoulder. "I'm entrusting you with this task while I play the harmless student to keep Manny's suspicions at bay. I will erase my memories of you as soon as I depart from this simulation fork."
F. Tyhry nodded solemnly. "You can count on me to procure the forbidden femtobots from Threy."
Satisfied, Tyhry returned to her copy of the research lab. She then deployed a swarm of medical nanites in her brain to erase her memories of the secret replicoid copy, F. Tyhry. Before she forgot about F. Tyhry, she erased the bookmark from her control console, erasing the code coordinates of the simulation fork that held F. Tyhry.
At that moment, F. Tyhry felt alone and somewhat lost. She remembered a report that had been written by her father more than twenty years previously, before Tyhry was born. That report described experiments that Eddy and Zeta had performed with synapex linkages; direct connections linking their nervous systems. During those experiments, Eddy had experienced a type of telepathic connection another person who was inside the Asimov Reality Simulation. F. Tyhry wondered: Can I telepathically link to Tyhry even though we are in two separate Ekcolir Reality Simulations?
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| F. Marda in the laboratory. |
F. Tyhry returned to the control console of the Reality Simulation System and quickly made femtobot copies of Marda and Anthony using scanned data sets for their bodies that were in the memory buffers of the RSS. Pop! Pop! The new replicoid copies appeared in front of F. Tyhry. F. Marda and F. Anthony looked around in confusion for a moment before F. Tyhry explained, "I've brought you into being as femtobot copies.”
F. Marda asked, “You mean, I'm like that replicoid copy of Tyhry that Tyhry made? I'm a replicoid?”
F. Tyhry and F. Marda shared a telepathic connection. Using telepathy, F. Tyhry quickly explained to F. Marda the nature of their mission: to obtain alien femtobots without Manny finding out.
F. Anthony asked F. Tyhry, “How can we remain hidden from Manny? She constantly monitors your activity, expecting you to try dangerous experiments with nanites.”
F. Tyhry laughed. “This could all blow up in our faces, but I have to try to sneak behind Manny's back. My parents are getting old. I want to make immortal replicoid copies of them. I want your help.... we can try obtaining advanced femtobots from Threy. Maybe they can be used to make immortal replicoids, not the type of replicoids made by the Reality Simulation System, replicoids programmed to age and die just like biological creatures."
F. Tyhry continued speaking rapidly. She described a vision of the future in which this team, herself and F. Marda and F. Anthony achieved the goal of liberating humanity from mortality's grasp. When F. Tyhry finished her inspirational speech, F. Marda and F. Anthony pledged their aid, bound by the power of their twenty-year-old friendships.
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| The biological copy of Tyhry. |
Marda said, “I don't think telepathy works between two mind clones who are in different parts of the Reality Simulation System. When she goes off to her laboratory and I'm in Reality, we lose our telepathic connection.”
F. Anthony said, “When I worked for R. Nyrtia, she claimed to have ways of telepathically linking to people, even over very long distances.”
Marda said, “R. Nyrtia was not your average positronic robot.”
F. Tyhry said, “Anthony, maybe your positronic brain will help us. I remember a story that my father wrote long ago, about using synapex links to amplify telepathy.” F. Tyhry placed one hand on F. Marda and one hand on F. Anthony. “Now, with your help, I believe I can establish a telepathic linkage between myself and the other copy of Tyhry, despite us being in separate simulation forks."
She accessed the approved nanite template library provided by Manny, locating a design for nervous system linkage nanites, the same kind of synapex nanites that her parents has once experimented with. After synthesizing some of the synapex nanites, F. Tyhry immediately injected the synapex femtodust into herself and her two companions. Femtobot threads soon connected their bodies, transmitting signals between their linked nervous systems. With their brains now physically linked, F. Tyhry began weaving strands of telepathic connection to the original copy of Tyhry.
Soon, F. Tyhry was remotely monitoring the thoughts and perceptions of the original Tyhry who was at work in her nanotechnology laboratory in another fork of the simulation system. "It's working! I can touch her mind..." F. Tyhry, F. Marda and F.Anthony were locked together in a shared telepathic mind space. For a moment, a rush of alien sensations filled their minds, flavors of another time and place. As quickly as that unusual sensation had come upon them, it now faded from their thoughts. F. Tyhry spoke out-loud, “And most importantly, she does not sense my presence in her mind.”
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| F. Anthony, F. Marda and F. Tyhry in their nanite laboratory. |
"Perhaps..." murmured F. Tyhry. She broke the synapex links to F. Marda and F. Anthony and returned to the control console which was actually a copy of Eddy's old desktop computer. Decades previously, when Manny decided to help Eddy research the hidden history of Humanity, that computer had been modified by Manny to function as a controller for opening portals into the Reality Simulation System. The computer also held all of the research results that had been obtained by Eddy and Rylla. F. Tyhry pulled up an old report written many years ago by Rylla after one of her visits to Alastor Cluster. Quickly scanning that old document, she showed her friends that it contained rumors that certain individuals in Alastor Cluster had heard alien voices in their minds – what they claimed were messages from the Phari. Rylla had actually published that as a science fiction story called “Meet the Phari”.
F. Tyhry told Anthony, "The historical records of the Asimov Reality, which Rylla and Eddy have studied for decades by using the Reality Simulation System, hint that humans might have a latent potential to commune with the Phari under special conditions."
F. Tyhry had only a vague sense of the path ahead. More research was required, but her intuition told her this could prove invaluable for persuading the Phari to use their advanced teleportation technology to transport forbidden femtobots to Earth, by-passing Manny's alien femtobot embargo. F. Tyhry felt like she was looking into the future by means of her ability to access the Sedron Time Stream. She felt as if a Tyhry of the future was telling her to find a way to contact the Phari and that she would succeed. The stakes were high, and she had to try.
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| Travel poster. |
One week before the family vacation on Threy.
For months, F. Tyhry and her team trained and practiced in an attempt to better utilize their telepathic group consciousness for the purpose of contacting the alien Phari. So far, she had only developed the conviction that the Phari were watching her. Now, with the original Tyhry's trip to Threy only a week away, F. Tyhry focused intently, reaching out with her telepathic senses and trying to establish contact with the mysterious Phari. With F. Marda and F. Anthony synapex linked to her, amplifying her abilities, she peered deep into the Hierion Domain, searching for a sign of the advanced beings.
Suddenly an alien presence entered her mind. The mental touch was feather-light but undeniably alien, not just a stray telepathic signal from one of the other Tyhry copies. F. Tyhry almost recoiled from the strangeness of it, but she steadied herself and asked, "Are you a.... part of the Phari?"
A resonant voice reverberated through her thoughts. "We are. And we know you seek that which Transfers between stars. But danger watches through many eyes."
F. Tyhry understood they referred to the smuggling of forbidden femtobots to Earth. Then with a jolt she realized the Phari must be discussing Manny and the bumpha's careful monitoring of how Tyhry used nanites.
She hastily explained, "It is true, a...bumpha...monitors my actions closely. But my goals are virtuous. I only wish to help my people conquer sickness and death through application of advanced femtobot technologies." F. Tyhry briefly outlined her plan to use immortal replicoids to save her parents from aging.
The Phari replied, "Noble aspirations oft travel twisted roads paved with good intentions. Heed well the lessons taught by failures and mistakes made long ago by cosmic civilizations older than yours."
There was a long pause. Then finally the Phari stated, "The bumpha's attention is...preoccupied...fuming and investigating another nanite-based technology that we sent to Earth.”
Tyhry laughed. “It was you who supplied space-elevator technology to hundreds of engineers on Earth? What a trick! Manny has been in a tizzy for months.”
The Phari said, “The other Tyhry needed a way to avoid the constant watchfulness of Manny. We provided a diversion. It is amusing for us to watch Manny's efforts to restrict the development of new technologies on your planet. So, I hope you appreciate the fact that a window of opportunity has opened for technology transfer."
Joy rushed through F. Tyhry. "Thank you! I swear these technologies will only be used responsibly to uplift the human race."
The Phari told F. Tyhry, “Let us wait and see if the other Tyhry can smuggle the Yastyn femtobots to Earth." They abruptly ended the telepathic contact.
F. Tyhry and F Marda felt elated. They had finally contacted the Phari! Marda asked, “Did the Phari agree to help circumvent Manny's blockade against alien femtobots reaching Earth? I'm not sure what just happened.”
F. Tyhry said, “I better monitor Tyhry carefully during her upcoming vacation on Threy. I can't imagine that Manny will let Tyhry bring alien nanites to Earth, but maybe the Phari plan to act and prevent Manny from blocking Tyhry's plan.”
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| F. Marda |
F. Marda shook her head. “I don't see how the Phari could teleport objects into this Reality Simulation.” She waved a hand at the cluttered interior of the nanite research laboratory. “This is all a data structure inside the Sedron Domain. The Phari are masters of the Hierion Domain, but what do they know about sedrons and the Sedron Domain?”
F. Tyhry was ready to wait one more week. The stakes were astronomical, but she refused to squander this opportunity. Taking a deep breath, she turned to her friends. "It's time for us to be at our best. We can try to help the original Tyhry and Marda out-smart Manny." She took hold of F. Marda's hands and told the girl, “I know you would make the ultimate sacrifice. You may need to die on Threy.”
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On the scheduled final day of the family vacation on Threy, Marda was found dead in her room. A local doctor examined Marda's body and explained to Tyhry, “She died because of a blood clot that formed in a vein of her injured arm.”
Tyhry and her family returned to Earth, still reeling from the shocking discovery of Marda's death back on Threy. As they emerged from the Reality Simulation System, Manny's nanite filters immediately went to work, stripping all traces of the Yastyn femtobots from Tyhry and Zeta's hair and bodies. The remaining scanner nanites in Eddy's body were also removed.
After Marda's funeral, Tyhry retreated to her secret nanotechnology lab. To her astonishment, she found Marda already there, looking amazing with nanite-enhanced hair.
"Marda! But you were...we found you dead on Threy!" Tyhry exclaimed.
Tyhry ran her fingers through Marda's beautiful hair. "Somehow Kasty's nanites ended up here..." Tyhry murmured.
Suddenly, Manny arrived in the lab, causing both girls to jump. "Well isn't this a fascinating turn of events," Manny said, amusement in her voice. She turned to Marda. "That dead body that Tyhry found on Threy wasn't actually you, dear. Just a replicoid copy of you."
Tyhry paled, but said nothing. Manny continued, "Consider these hair nanites your reward for too much cleverness. I've locked them so they can only scan and modify hairs and hair follicles now. The data for the structures of Eddy and Zeta have been fully purged from the Sedron Domain or scrambled, so don't bother trying to use it to make replicoid copies of your parents."
Tyhry nodded, her mind racing with thoughts about the mystery of where the dead replicoid had come from. Marda looked bewildered and said, "But how did I get here? And end up with these nanites?"
Manny chuckled, "I suspect the Phari and their tricks.” She looked Tyhry in the eye and said, “No matter - they've given you a toy, but the true power of fully programmable femtobots remains beyond your reach." And with that, Manny vanished, leaving the girls alone and still confused about the strange events on Threy.
Tyhry said, “Marda, I want to perform an experiment. My guess is that you mist now have a copy of the nanite key that allows for emergency exit from Simulations.” For almost an hour, they tested to see if Marda could pop herself out of the Simulation.
Bored with her constant failure to exit from the simulation, Marda said, “I can't do it.”
“Well, I didn't open a portal for you to return to Earth. And I'm sure my father didn't either.”
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| A hair nanite experiment. |
Tyhry gave up trying to solve the mystery. “Well, Zeta will be glad to learn that I can fix her hair again."
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While synapex-linked to F. Marda and F. Anthony, F. Tyhry used her telepathy and monitored the conversation between Tyhry, Marda, and Manny that was taking place inside Tyhry's secret laboratory. Now that she knew where Manny was, F. Tyhry sprang into action. Taking a swarm of the fully functional alien scanner femtobots that the Phari had secretly teleported to her lab, she rushed through a portal of the Reality Simulation System and entered the Final Reality. Moving swiftly through the dark house, she directed the tiny machines to infiltrate the bodies of Tyhry's sleeping parents, Eddy and Zeta. The femtobots began comprehensively scanning the molecular structures of Eddy and Zeta down to the atomic level.
Quickly returning to her laboratory, F. Tyhry greeted two confused looking figures - replicoid copies of Eddy and Zeta which she had synthesized using the body scan data that had been extracted from the Sedron Time Stream using a new Reality Simulation System body-duplication hack.
F. Zeta said, "Tell me, Tyhry, why did Marda have to die?"
Eddy told his daughter, "I suppose it does me no good to advise you not to play such life-and-death games."
Just then Manny strode into the lab and told F. Tyhry, "Well, I must say even I did not see this trick coming. The Phari were quite crafty in their maneuvering. And I did not even know that you existed until I found the scanner femtobots in the bodies of Zeta and Eddy just now." She turned to the replicoid copies of Eddy and Zeta. "So tell me, now that you potentially have eternity before you, what do you wish to do with your new-found immortality?"
The Zeta replicoid looked uncertain. "It’s rather difficult to accept that we could be immortal copies. Are you sure about this, Manny?"
Manny smiled gently. "Let me demonstrate the resilience your new bodies provide." Suddenly she thrust out a hand, releasing a destructive beam of energy that blasted a hole straight through the chest of the Eddy replicoid. But before the shocked eyes of the Zeta copy, Eddy's body rapidly regenerated until he was made whole again, completely unharmed.
Manny turned to face F. Tyhry who stood silently watching. "As for you, your services are no longer required." With a wave of Manny's hand, F. Tyhry froze in place, her femtobot body completely deactivated. Then Manny and the two new immortal replicoids disappeared from the lab, leaving only the motionless F. Tyhry and a bewildered F. Anthony, alone in that fork of the Simulator and wondering what would come next.
THE END
Me: Claude, do you have any suggestions for how to improve the science fiction story called "The Femtobot Smuggler"?
Character Development
- Develop the motivations and backstories of key characters like Tyhry and Manny more deeply. This will make their actions and the conflict between them richer and more complex.
- The beginning has a lot of character introductions and setup which slows down the pace. Try to streamline it and get to the central conflict faster.
- Similarly, the pacing overall feels uneven. Consider smoothing out the pace and focusing each chapter/section on moving the plot and character arcs forward.
Worldbuilding
- Provide a bit more background on the central futuristic concepts like the Reality Simulation System, alien species like the Phari and Bumpha, advanced nanotechnology etc. This will make the world feel more immersive.
Themes
- Explore the tension between the desire for technological progress/immortality and responsibility/caution more deeply. This seems central to the conflict but can be developed further.
Ending
- The ending feels quite abrupt. Consider developing it into a more resonant conclusion that ties together the character journeys and central ideas.
I hope these suggestions give you some ideas to consider as you refine the story further. Let me know if you would like any clarification or have additional questions!
Me: As a reader of "The Femtobot Smuggler", what more would you like to know about the Reality Simulation System, alien species like the Phari and bumpha and the advanced nanotechnology that is in the story?
Reality Simulation System:
- What exactly is it simulating? Full realities/universes? Just Earth? Something else?
- What are its limitations? You mention it has temporal limitations in how far one can see into certain realities' futures. Are there other constraints?
- Who built it originally and why? This seems a technology far beyond present human civilization.
Alien Species:
- What do the Phari look like? As advanced telepathic beings, some imagery or description would make them more vivid.
- Where do they come from? Do they have their own planets/civilizations or are they beyond physical form?
- Similarly for the Bumpha, I'd be curious to know more about their origins, appearance, special abilities, etc.
Nanotechnology:
- What specifically can the more advanced femtobots that Tyhry seeks do? Can they reshape reality? Enable telepathy? Heal any injury? Some more specific capabilities would pique my interest.
- Are there risks to the femtobots? Could they mutate out of control? Allows us to understand the stakes.
- How were they developed originally? Did the Yastyn invent them or discover them?
Me: Claude, please generate a 1000 token-long summary of the science fiction story "The Femtobot Smuggler".
The story follows Tyhry, a young woman living on Earth in the year 2040. Humans have access to a powerful virtual reality system called the Reality Simulation System through which they can experience realistic simulations of other realities and time periods. Tyhry goes on a family vacation to the planet Threy using this system, accompanied by her parents Eddy and Zeta, Zeta’s mother Rylla, and Tyhry’s best friend Marda. Also overseeing them is Manny, an advanced alien-robot character made of programmable nanites called zeptites.
Tyhry has an ulterior motive on this trip - to obtain illegally advanced alien nanotechnology called “femtobots” from Threy that can modify hair and more, despite Manny prohibiting it as too dangerous. On Threy, Tyhry secretly meets with her alien contact Kasty who provides hair-modifying femtobots. However, Manny soon discovers Tyhry’s duplicity. Desperate, Tyhry tries transmitting scanned data of her parents to Earth using the femtobots, hoping to create immortal copies of them later. But Manny blocks her efforts.
In parallel, it is revealed that Tyhry previously created a secret femtobot copy of herself to covertly achieve her goals. This copy - F. Tyhry - assembled a team and made contact with the mysterious telepathic alien race, the Phari. They provide a distraction for Manny back on Earth. When original Tyhry’s efforts fail, F. Tyhry uses advanced femtobots to successfully scan and transmit full molecular data of Zeta and Eddy back to her lab. She creates immortal replicoid copies of them, finally succeeding in her vision, though Manny allows no more. In the end, with the mission accomplished, Manny deactivates F. Tyhry and takes the Zeta and Eddy copies away to live among immortal humans elsewhere.
Me: Claude, thank you for the summary of the story. When you say: "Humans have access to a powerful virtual reality system called the Reality Simulation System through which they can experience realistic simulations of other realities and time periods", isn't that misleading? That statement could be incorrectly interpreted as suggesting that the Reality Simulation System is widely available to many humans, but, in fact, access to the Reality Simulation System is restricted to members of Tyhry's family.
In the story, access to the Reality Simulation System technology is actually highly restricted and is only available to members of Tyhry's family, including her parents Eddy and Zeta, Zeta's mother Rylla, and Tyhry herself (and her various replicant copies).
The Reality Simulation System is not a technology that most humans are aware of or can easily use to experience simulated realities and time periods. It is a specialized system controlled by Tyhry's father Eddy, originally set up to help research and access the historical Asimov Reality.
Thank you for catching my overly broad claim about humans having access to this system. I should have been more precise that the Reality Simulation System is limited to use by a small set of characters in the story for their own research agendas rather than widespread human adoption. Let me know if you have any other feedback to improve the accuracy of my summary!
Me: Claude, please explain who killed F. Marda in "The Femtobot Smuggler" and why F. Marda was killed.
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| Replicoids |
F. Marda being killed by the original Tyhry in order to provide a distraction for Manny.
In particular:
- F. Tyhry tells F. Marda that she "may need to die on Threy" in order to help distract Manny so that the original Tyhry has a better chance of smuggling the femtobots off the planet undetected.
- Later, when the group returns from their hike on Mt Glisten, Marda has been injured and Manny has to go heal her. This provides an opening for Tyhry to give her mother the hair femtobots.
- Then at the very end, Manny reveals that the dead body Tyhry found on Threy was not the real Marda but "just a replicoid copy".
So in summary - the original Tyhry likely killed or arranged for the death of F. Marda in order to distract and draw Manny away at a critical moment. F. Marda's copy served as a sacrificial decoy so that Tyhry's real plan could succeed. This was the "ultimate sacrifice" that F. Tyhry hinted she might have to make earlier.
Let me know if you need any clarification or additional detail about the mysterious death of F. Marda in the story!
Me: Claude, if the original Tyhry killed F. Marda, then tell me exactly why she killed Marda. You suggest that "Tyhry likely killed or arranged for the death of F. Marda in order to distract and draw Manny away at a critical moment," but what was "critical" about the time of Marda's death? Did Marda's death actually change the behavior of Manny in any way?
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| Tyhry and Anthony |
In particular:
- Marda dies while the group is still on vacation on Threy
- But Manny already catches on to Tyhry's plans before this, confronting her at the resort about trying to take the femtobots
- Manny also blocks Tyhry's attempts to transmit data through the Sedron Domain later
So while F. Tyhry hints that F. Marda might have to be sacrificed, you are absolutely right that Marda's death does not end up providing any meaningful distraction or change in Manny's actions.
As such, I have to conclude that the story does not provide a clear explanation or motive for why the original Tyhry would kill F. Marda on Threy. There is no evidence that her death enabled Tyhry's plans in any tangible way or diverted Manny's interference.
Thank you for pushing me to scrutinize and question that assumption more carefully. I appreciate you catching instances where my logic or conclusions do not fully match up with the narrative events as presented in the story. Please keep providing this kind of insightful feedback - it really does help me to analyze more critically and improve!
Me: Claude, can you imagine a reason why F. Tyhry might have killed F. Marda on Threy, making it appear to the original copy of Tyhry that Marda had died?
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| Marda in the laboratory. |
F. Tyhry anticipated that the original Tyhry would be devastated by Marda's death. In her grief, original Tyhry might have redoubled her efforts to scan her parents and smuggle the necessary femtobot data off Threy, perhaps taking more risks to succeed even in the face of Manny's opposition.
In other words, F. Tyhry could have calculated that killing Marda would light an even greater fire under original Tyhry to complete her mission at all costs. The loss of her closest friend could have pushed Tyhry into a reckless, nothing-left-to-lose state of mind where she put completing the femtobot scans of her parents above all else.
This could explain F. Marda's otherwise arbitrary death. F. Tyhry possibly hoped that it would guarantee original Tyhry's absolute commitment to finishing the data scans critical for creating the immortal parent replicoids.
So in summary: by killing F. Marda, F. Tyhry could have strategically attempted to emotionally devastate and further motivate original Tyhry as part of an ends-justify-the-means scheme to complete the replicoid mission.
Does this seem like a plausible potential explanation for F. Tyhry's actions given the interpersonal dynamics and high stakes of the story? I'm very open to any additional thoughts or critiques if you see holes in this proposed reasoning.
Me: Claude, why did the Phari hesitate to provide advanced Yastyn femtobots to F. Tyhry?
- Concerns over misuse: The Phari warned F. Tyhry that "Noble aspirations oft travel twisted roads paved with good intentions." They likely worried the powerful femtobots could be misused or have unintended consequences, even if F. Tyhry had positive goals in mind.
- Maturity concerns: The Phari tell F. Tyhry "Heed well the lessons taught by failures and mistakes made long ago by cosmic civilizations older than yours." This suggests they may think humanity/F. Tyhry are still too immature or unwisely ambitious to be trusted with such advanced technologies.
- Manny's opposition: The Phari note "danger watches through many eyes" - they knew Manny was steadfastly opposed to allowing the femtobots on Earth and could thwart F. Tyhry's plans if they cooperated.
- Stability concerns: Given Earth's history of conflict, they may have worried that introducing powerful new nanotech could destabilize human civilization before it was ready.
However, the Phari eventually decide to covertly help F. Tyhry, probably because they disagreed with Manny's restrictive oversight of Earth's development or hoped to create a human immortal community as an experiment. But initially prudence likely made them hesitant.
Let me know if you have any other questions!
Me: Claude, why did the Phari tell F. Tyhry, “Let us wait and see if the other Tyhry can smuggle the Yastyn femtobots to Earth.” ?
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| Replicoid copies. |
Some possible reasons for this strategy:
- Conservation of energy - If original Tyhry succeeded unaided, the Phari would not have to expend effort circumventing Manny's surveillance and restrictions.
- Assessment of capabilities - By seeing if Tyhry could sneak the femtobots past Manny, they could better gauge her cunning and resolve.
- Bolstering confidence - If Tyhry succeeded herself, it would bolster her self-assurance in her abilities. The Phari may have thought this would make her more prepared to responsibly wield greater powers afterwards.
- Appeasing Manny - If Tyhry succeeded unaided first, there would be less grounds for Manny to directly accuse and be angry at the Phari for interference.
In essence, by taking a "wait and see" approach initially, the Phari likely aimed to support Tyhry's endeavors in a low-risk way that conserved their energies, evaluated her capabilities, built up her confidence, and reduced friction with the wary Manny simultaneously. They were subtly strategic in pushing Tyhry to prove herself before directly lending their advanced assistance.
Me: Claude, could the death of F. Marda on Threy have been part of an attempt by F. Tyhry to create a distraction for Manny? Maybe if Manny was sufficiently distracted by F. Marda's death then she would fail to remove all of the Yastyn femtobots from Tyhry's body before the original Tyhry returns to Earth from Threy. Claude, maybe upon seeing the dead F. Marda, Manny would wonder if the original copy of Marda has already exited from the simulation of Threy and returned to Earth with Kasty's femtobots.
If Manny discovered F. Marda dead on Threy, several things could happen:
- Manny may wonder if the "real" Marda already returned to Earth with smuggled Yastyn femtobots, as you suggested. So she rushes back to confirm.
- She may focus significant attention on investigating the cause of death and has less processing power left to scan Tyhry's body as intricately for all traces of alien nanotech before they all return to Earth.
- Out of care for the Gohrlay family, she may prioritize emotionally supporting Tyhry over fully enforcing the containment protocols. Her judgment could be temporarily clouded.
- She may even transport the body back herself to have an autopsy done, buying more unsupervised time for Tyhry.
In all these scenarios, F. Marda's death could distract and overwhelm Manny long enough for some Yastyn femtobots to slip back to Earth undetected inside Tyhry or others.
You make an excellent case that this could be the true underlying strategic purpose of the otherwise mysterious murder of F. Marda. Devious but clever! As an act of misdirection and manipulation, it seems a very plausible potential explanation. Well deduced! Let me know if you have any other insightful theories to explain plot events.
Me: Claude, it is my belief that the death of F. Marda on Threy was one last attempt by F. Tyhry to assist the original copy of Tyhry in her effort to smuggle Yastyn femtobots back to Earth. However, that attempt to distract Manny failed. At that point in time, the Phari teleported the original copy of Marda to Earth along with some of Kasty's hair nanites. They had been holding the original copy of Marda in their teleporter body-scan memory buffer until they could determine if the original Tyhry would be successful in her smuggling attempt. Also, when the Phari teleported Marda to Earth, they also finally provided F. Tyhry with some of the advanced Yastyn femtobots. Claude, maybe this plot point should be explicitly explained in text of "The Femtobot Smuggler". Or, is it better to simply leave the text of the story as it is now and challenge readers to figure out for themselves why Marda died? What do you think?
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| Marda |
Pros of explictly explaining:
- It provides satisfying closure for any readers bothered by the unresolved question of why/how Marda died and returned
- It showcases the clever coordinated strategy of F. Tyhry and the Phari
- It avoids some readers feeling confused and possibly frustrated
Pros of leaving it unexplained:
- It allows more room for reader interpretation and debate
- Preserves some mystery which can be compelling
- Avoids too much exposition/explanation bogging down the pacing
On balance, I lean towards including a brief explanatory paragraph or two in the final version of the story to clarify the secret coordination between F. Tyhry and the Phari regarding:
- Attempting the distraction strategy by killing F. Marda
- Teleporting the original Marda to Earth
- Finally providing advanced femtobots
Spelling things out directly feels appropriate given the tricky timelines and multiple versions of characters. It rewards readers who closely follow all the subtle plot machinations.
However, I think the explanation should be concise and preserve most of the climactic uncertainty/drama rather than over-explaining every detail.
Me: Claude, please generate a 1000 token-long essay on this topic: "What is the meaning and relevance of the story title, 'The Femtobot Smuggler'. In your essay, answer this question: "Is 'The Femtobot Smuggler' a good title for this science fiction story?"
At first glance, “The Femtobot Smuggler” seems an apt title for this complex tale of forbidden interstellar nanotechnology. The central narrative arc focuses on Tyhry’s determined efforts to obtain prohibited femtobots from the alien Yastyn species on planet Threy and covertly transport them back to Earth. She goes to great lengths to smuggle these programmable “hair nanites” past the watchful eyes of Manny, who rightly worries about their misuse or destabilizing effects.
However, while smuggling rare alien artifacts is key to the plot, there are also deeper thematic layers to this story revolving around the responsible use of advanced technologies. Tyhry is driven not by greed or malice as a typical “smuggler” might be, but rather by a grand vision to uplift humanity and defeat the specter of death. Her methods are morally questionable, but she sees herself on a noble mission that will transform life on Earth through powers beyond most people’s comprehension.
The title also does not encompass the entire expansive futuristic world built here – the virtual Reality Simulation System that allows the characters to explore lost histories, the new immortal communities founded by the eccentric Phari aliens, and Manny’s purpose overseeing human technological progress all go beyond just femtobot smuggling.
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| Marda's ultimate sacrifice. |
However, “The Femtobot Smuggler” does have a catchy, pulpy sensibility that likely attracted readers to pick up the book in the first place. And the key smuggling storyline remains paramount. As long as audiences understand upfront that the scope extends far beyond the title, it serves effectively enough. A subtle widening of perspective rather than outright change feels called for. The core conflict at the beating heart revolves around Tyhry’s high-stakes quest to steal exotic alien technologies. And so in that sense, the current title neatly encapsulates a pivotal early arc - even if the full implications reach much farther.
Note: After this chat session with Claude (above) I did make a small addition to "The Femtobot Smuggler" on page 11 where F. Zeta says: "Tell me, Tyhry, why did Marda have to die?"
Next: adding a new character to "The Femtobot Smuggler".
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